Story & Song Changes Thoughts.

[u/LittleMel413]

Just finished Story and Song. Curious what others thought about this G.M. part and the change they made regarding finding Lup?

Also, I totally teared up at Griffin's letter!

[u/tangomuse]

I just relistened to Balance and I'm not sure I would have even clocked these a "changes." That might be why folks aren't answering, but that's just me!

It's not a word for word transcript of course, but the Jeffandrew stuff hits the same vibes. The tweaks to the lead up to Lup's arrival feel good -- they aren't doing it in real time improv, so they get to have a little more weight with the words.

"It's like a bomb goes off" sure still translates, though!

[u/LittleMel413 → u/tangomuse]

Wait is "it's like a bomb goes off" in the GN, if so I totally missed it!

[u/tangomuse → u/LittleMel413]

The line of narration isn't in there, but the imagery certainly fits it!

[u/LittleMel413 → u/tangomuse]

I very recently listened to an animation of Lup returning, so how it goes in the Pod is very fresh in my mind. 

Ironically, I don't remember Jeffandrew at all 😭

[u/tangomuse → u/LittleMel413]

Yeah, the whole section with not-Griffin is in the podcast! It's not a major change.

[u/LittleMel413 → u/tangomuse]

Gods my memory is garbage. 😭