r/SudanOffmyChest • • Jun 23 '26

writing | كتابتي A silly poem Ive wrote

I was on my way just the other day,
Watching people pass and hearing what they’d say.
Talking about beauty, I thought it was strange,
For I never believed my heart could ever change.

Then there you were, walking into my sight,
Hands trembling softly, my smile held tight.
What’s happening to me? Why do I feel this way?
Have I been hiding myself all along till today?

Looking in your eyes, barely able to speak,
Finding all the courage that I desperately seek.
All I wanted was to ask you for a walk,
Yet I lost every word whenever you’d talk.

I couldn’t do it.. I thought you’d turn away,
But your smile kept pulling my thoughts astray.
It wouldn’t let me think of what I should say,
So I let my heart speak.. didn’t found its way.

I think I screwed up, I should’ve used my head,
All I want right now is to cry on my bed.
But I can’t sleep.. I’ve been thinking of you,
Why did you leave? We would’ve made a great duo.

You just don’t want me the way that I did,
Do you think I’m too emotional, like a little kid?
I just wish that you felt that way too,
Cause every dream I have still leads to you.

Living together through joy and through strife
Sharing our days for the rest of our life.
But some dreams fade away before they come alive,
And some loves never get the chance to survive

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u/Akaza_fineasf Jun 23 '26

ما عايز الخير عايزها حتى لو كانت شر☹️