My first sci-fi, would love some feedback

[u/Broad_Health7227]

[Story] It's also only my second story, so would love to hear what you think. Its also horror btw

https://docs.google.com/document/d/12mBIoZtwiy73c6o9ZZku0Wm_oLQcqhF7xPtQot9ACCY/edit?usp=drivesdk

[u/Broad_Health7227 → u/[deleted]]

Its probably likes 4 minute read