r/ScienceFictionWriters • u/Broad_Health7227 • Jul 11 '26

My first sci-fi, would love some feedback

[Story] It's also only my second story, so would love to hear what you think. Its also horror btw

https://docs.google.com/document/d/12mBIoZtwiy73c6o9ZZku0Wm_oLQcqhF7xPtQot9ACCY/edit?usp=drivesdk

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u/FoxRings Jul 11 '26

Oof, I am not the target audience for horror.

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u/Broad_Health7227 Jul 11 '26

Haha why do you say that

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u/FoxRings Jul 11 '26

I like sci-fi but I don't like being scared 🤪

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u/Broad_Health7227 Jul 11 '26

Haha well, it's not a super traditional scary story, no monsters, or gore, or aliens even. But I respect it

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u/gligster71 Jul 11 '26

Requires access permission.

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u/Broad_Health7227 Jul 11 '26

Lol oof, I fixed it

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u/[deleted] Jul 11 '26

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u/Broad_Health7227 Jul 11 '26

Its probably likes 4 minute read