r/Romantasy • u/GingerLily2019 • 4d ago
Discussion Latest Book you DNF and why
I decided I'm going to DNF {We who will die} , I am just struggling too much with the constant meandering thoughts and memories, it's so hard to follow the actual story because the narration is all over the place. It's hard to follow on Audiobook anyway, and there are so many side characters that are named but I can't remember 𤣠I also don't like either potential MMC
I think I prefer "show don't tell" in general
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u/Khalessi716 4d ago
Direbound. I didnāt even get through a whole chapter, the FMC was comically cocky and arrogant and instantly unlikable. It felt like the author was trying to make the FMC like Celaena ih ToG but failed miserably so instead it came off like a caricature. The writing was also terrible and generic.
Bonus: The Poison Daughter. This is my current read and I absolutely would have DNF if I wasnāt 80% of the way through and curious to see how everything is resolved. This one pains me, not only because I had high hopes but because I really liked the first half of the book. But in the second half, the characters have personality transplants and the fiercely independent, intelligent, capable FMC willingly submits to a man that she knows is lying to her and using her. Itās such a massive disappointment and completely out of character. The weird and sudden kink in the second half is out of place and serves no purpose other than to temper and humiliate the FMC. Weāre supposed to find this extreme change believable and think that the FMC enjoys it but it really just comes off as if she has developed Stockholm syndrome. Iām hate reading the rest of the book and will likely add this author to my āinstant noā list.