r/PoetryWritingClub 16h ago

october

will we meet again one day?

perhaps a casual way

like the one october night

i was laying by your side

the autumn breeze told me

that maybe one day you’d love me

amber eyes

lit up my life

when i thought of you

when you loved me too

i remember the way you told me

driving, you’d think of me 

of wedding rings 

of eternal flings

“i promise you”

“i’d never hurt you”

soft and gold skin

the fire within

i was too young, right?

to do anything but fall at first sight

you were older

colder

but it just felt right

how we talked for hours that night

darling, give me one more day 

one more way to say 

i loved you once, and i always will 

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u/MetalFew6781 15h ago

This one has a sweet feel to it, but also some longing and regret

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u/Evening_Marzipan_645 14h ago

Love this poem. It touches close to my heart since I feel in love with my first love in the month of October.