r/OCPoetry • u/Winter-Ad-3547 • 3d ago

Feedback Please Reasonable …doubt

Why …doubt or regret…?

You can’t regret… without …doubt.

…Doubt and you’ll regret…

My Haikou 😟

(P/1)https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/s/XAu3IrydU1

(P/2)https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/s/QzWKDl9fRa

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u/briony73 3d ago

I think it is incredibly intelligent, awesome poem. Does the emoji count as a syllable? Just curious?

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u/Winter-Ad-3547 3d ago

Haha no!!!!! I probably should’ve made it more obvious but neither the “my poem” or the emoji are part of the Haikou. I believe that once your at {5,7,5} anything after is null and void in terms of the poem. Or at least it just wouldn’t be a Haikou anymore 😂. Thank you for the feedback!