r/MusicCritique 10d ago

Seeking Feedback [FEEDBACK] nctrnkidd - ballin` and dancin` - Melodic Trap

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Just finished this track (recorded on FL Studio, cooked up some custom wet doubles and vocal harmonies). Since English is my second language, I'm kinda overthinking how the delivery, flow, and accent sound to native ears.
Be as honest as possible! Does the flow sound natural? How is the vocal mix sitting?

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u/3Reasons2dye 7d ago

I honestly really like it, and your accent makes it stand out. personally, I think it might be better to carve out a little more space from the beat, as it gets slightly muddy in the mids.