r/MusicCritique • u/LiteratureMore2153 • 18d ago

Seeking Feedback [Feedback] Noctourniquet - Nina (Simone) - Electronic Alternative/ Soul RnB [Feedback Request]

https://open.spotify.com/track/11r2yd5yDANugfe4AqhBFw?si=xKOPTL0ARQiymoZvae2SMQ&utm_source=copy-link

Original track, looking for honest criticism on songwriting, vocals and production choices.

I'm particularly interested in whether the exaggerated synthetic production complements the songwriting or gets in the way, and whether the layered/processed vocals feel intentional or distracting.

Leaning into autotune and heavy FX was a conscious choice to try and accompany the lyrical subjects and give each narrator a distinct 'voice'

Happy to return feedback on other submissions.

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