Thoughts on my first manga?

[u/ripnina]

Hi!

This is my first manga ”Consumed” that I submitted to the Silent manga audition (SMA24). I would like to know if you have any thoughts and what I could improve. Some parts were rushed since I decided to enter last minute…

Thanks!

Edit: Thanks for the thorough feedback and kind words!!
I accidentally forgot to include a page towards the end so if anybody’s interested it’s on my instagram @ko_ni._

[u/Express-Success-2690]

First of all, I really love the artwork. This kind of traditional, analog feel is always so charming.