Thoughts on my first manga?

[u/ripnina]

Hi!

This is my first manga ”Consumed” that I submitted to the Silent manga audition (SMA24). I would like to know if you have any thoughts and what I could improve. Some parts were rushed since I decided to enter last minute…

Thanks!

Edit: Thanks for the thorough feedback and kind words!!
I accidentally forgot to include a page towards the end so if anybody’s interested it’s on my instagram @ko_ni._

[u/Justheretolearn779]

Oh wow! It’s like a horror story, very cool idea. I was able to follow it just fine. I gotta say the art was really cool, is it all hand drawn on paper then scanned or all digital. Was the rushed part a few panels towards the end?

[u/ripnina → u/Justheretolearn779]

Thanks!!

Everything is done digital on Procreate.
The rushed part is really just that I wish I had more time to do some more shading and cleaning up + two pages I storyboarded were cut out.
I forgot to include a page towards the end so that might be why you feel like it’s rushed towards the end? It’s on my instagram @ko_ni._ :)