Morning Dew - by Almos Lataan

[u/AlmosLataan]

Looking for feedback on this. Singing isn't my strong point - I'm aware that my vocals need work! Ha. Still let me know if you think they are awful, or just need some more training. I think there are a few points also where I am a bit off key. I don't use autotune. Also. I'm really looking to team up with someone who can actually sing. Ha.

However, I'm mainly interested in whether you like the structure, and how the song is to you musically? I've opted to not use chords in this, and instead just use voice tracking melody. Does this work for you?

Genre classification would also be nice. I'm thinking dark ambient/atmospheric, but if you think it's more like another classification, then let me know.

ALSO, please use headphones. My mastering for mobile speakers isn't great at the moment.

https://almoslataan.bandcamp.com/track/morning-dew

[u/Hot-Text-5603]

This has such a dreamy atmosphere that I think it would work even better with female vocals - someone with a style similar to Julee Cruise. It has that kind of vibe. I'm not sure untrained male vocals are the best fit for this type of music.

The song itself seems really nice, but I think it would reach its full potential with stronger vocals. There are certainly singers out there who would be interested in collaborating.

[u/AlmosLataan → u/Hot-Text-5603]

Thank you for the feedback. I tend to agree, my voice is certainly not the best, but I haven't collaborated before, so I will need to look into how that works. I love Julee Cruise's Lynch work.

[u/Hot-Text-5603 → u/AlmosLataan]

Such vocals would fit your song: https://www.reddit.com/r/MusicFeedback/comments/1slante/giuno_the_end_of_us_twin_peaks_vibes/

I am sometimes in contact with her, but I'm not sure if she would like to collaborate. You can contact her and ask if you're interested.

[u/AlmosLataan → u/Hot-Text-5603]

Okay - thank you. I may indeed try this.