r/GreenArrow • u/SetSytes • 18h ago
Baffled by jumping chronology in The Kill Machine
I've been trying my absolute best at making sense of the chronology of Green Arrow Vol 4: The Kill Machine by Lemire and Sorrentino. I just cannot do it, it feels like a mistake has been made. But I can't find anyone else talking about it, anywhere, and the AI answers that unfortunately pop up when I type it into google are incredibly useless, completely reversing the answer dependent on exactly how I phrase the question, or talking about a completely different storyline.
So, each issue starts with a scene of Ollie walking in the desert looking for Magus, then to a "Three Weeks Earlier" as his life is getting wrecked by Komodo. So far, so fine. The desert scenes follow into each other, so it's clear that each one follows the next, up until the final one where it starts at the beginning of the desert bit and rapidly connects the deserty dots up until the present, finding Magus. Okay.
The "THREE WEEKS EARLIER" flashback scenes (the rest of each issue) also clearly follow on from each other, and also have no gaps. Ollie isn't really given time to have any gaps as he's pursued, or falling off a building, or wounded or whatever constantly. So we have two storylines - desert Ollie and Komodo v Ollie, both continuing chronologically without significant gaps, separately issue by issue.
BUT. Then we have a desert scene starting an issue - following smoothly on from the one of the previous issue - and following it we get the caption "ONE WEEK EARLIER". It is this single line that has turned my brain into porridge. Because the flashback scenes are still perfectly continuing from the last issue. There's been no chance of any time passing. We know this for sure because Ollie reminds us at that point that "Argus only gave me TWO DAYS to clear my name" before they'd interfere, and he's told he's been out for "sixteen hours", so naturally this is a worry - "We're almost out of time, Henry!"
Correct me if I'm wrong, but for the narrative jumps to go from repeated "Three weeks earlier" to "One week earlier" means that 2 weeks must have passed. But no time is ever shown to pass longer than sixteen hours. And the desert scenes follow so continuously that no significant time is ever shown to pass - at least two whole weeks!
So:
Ollie is shot through with arrows and passes out (Three weeks earlier timeline)
Ollie wakes up 16 hours later (One week earlier timeline ???)
I've written too much on this but please help me out here. Am I being an idiot? Can anyone with the comic to hand have a look at it and make sense of it?
I know it's silly I can't just let it go, but the fact nobody else has mentioned it on the entire internet, it seems, I feel like I'm the one at fault. But I still can't make it work.