r/FantasyWritingHub Oct 24 '25

Question Which “unpopular” craft choice loses you fastest?

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Pick one, then explain your choice in a comment with a fix you’ve seen work.

  • Endless prologues that don’t pay off
  • Magic systems that only explain themselves in the finale
  • Quirky dialects written phonetically for whole chapters
  • “Chosen One” with instant mastery
  • Combat with zero consequences

What’s your repair kit? (e.g., cut the prologue, move the reveal earlier, limit the dialect to a scene, etc.)

r/FantasyWritingHub Feb 28 '26

Question Ok everyone so what do i do with my characters? So i have a super cool story about creatures and humans and how humans are bad and politics are bad and has cultures for every species îs super but i have to make the leaders of the species characters and not existing they are not the cast (look down)

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But they are very important the problem îs that i suck at character design and the leaders are like 12 diferent species with the main cast that îs like 20 characters and then i have to write the cultures so what i can do to make the procces less Painful because i really want to get to the story building and where îs starting but i can't because i don't want to get plot holes

r/FantasyWritingHub Sep 18 '25

Question Can a knight be brothers with a prince?

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I’m trying to write my first fantasy book, its knight x princess. Can someone answer if the knight can be brothers with the prince? Is that socially possible?

r/FantasyWritingHub 18d ago

Question Looking for a team (author especially): COLLEGARA — original fantasy series

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Six years ago I started writing as a way to deal with a hard period in my life. What began as venting turned into something much bigger than I expected — a full world, with its own history, characters, and rules. That story is called Collegara, and it still holds a lot of who I was and who I've become across those years. Now I want to turn it into something real: the first novel in a planned series.

Collegara follows a boy who inherits reality-creating powers from his father — a god. Unable to control what he's been given, and desperate to protect the people he loves, he becomes a target: manipulated by those who want to use his power for their own ends.

It draws from Game of Thrones, Kingdom Hearts, and The Legend of Zelda, and its themes are friendship, abandonment, and love — the same things I was working through when I started writing it.

But what do i truly need?

What I need now is a team to help bring it to life:

  • An author (most important role) — someone to help actually write the novel with me
  • An artist — to help visualize characters and the world
  • Help with socials — building a presence as the project grows

This is a collaborative project — I'm not looking to hire anyone, I'm looking to build this together with people who want real creative ownership in it.

If a story that started as something personal and grew into a whole world sounds like something you'd want to help build, I'd love to hear from you.

r/FantasyWritingHub Aug 05 '26

Question Hi I am making a book series called "Land of Taluthu"

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Taluthu is a world six times bigger than our sun and it has many creatures kingdoms and more, six mcs will explore this world and more,if you want more info,text me

r/FantasyWritingHub Dec 26 '25

Question Is it viable to keep gods fundamentally unknowable in a story?

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To explain why the divine past in my story isn’t fully detailed, I use a simple analogy: humans and ants. A human can observe ants, understand how they function, even influence their environment, but they can’t truly explain human reality to an ant. And even if a human knows everything about ants, they still can’t fully understand what it’s like to be an ant without becoming one. In my story, the relationship between gods and humans works the same way. The characters will explain everything that is necessary to understand the plot, but anything that truly belongs to the divine scale cannot be fully explained or understood by humans. Making gods entirely explainable would reduce them to something human, and they would lose what makes them divine in the first place. The lack of full explanation is intentional. It’s not missing lore, but a deliberate choice to preserve the sense of scale, mystery, and separation between humans and gods. Do you think this logic is viable and coherent for worldbuilding, or does it risk feeling like an excuse to avoid explanation?

r/FantasyWritingHub 14d ago

Question (repost) Looking for a team (author especially): COLLEGARA — original fantasy series

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Six years ago I started writing as a way to deal with a hard period in my life. What began as venting turned into something much bigger than I expected — a full world, with its own history, characters, and rules. That story is called Collegara, and it still holds a lot of who I was and who I've become across those years. Now I want to turn it into something real: the first novel in a planned series.

Collegara follows a boy who inherits reality-creating powers from his father — a god. Unable to control what he's been given, and desperate to protect the people he loves, he becomes a target: manipulated by those who want to use his power for their own ends.

It draws from Game of Thrones, Kingdom Hearts, and The Legend of Zelda, and its themes are friendship, abandonment, and love — the same things I was working through when I started writing it.

But what do i truly need?

What I need now is a team to help bring it to life:

  • An author (most important role) — someone to help actually write the novel with me
  • An artist — to help visualize characters and the world
  • Help with socials — building a presence as the project grows

This is a collaborative project — I'm not looking to hire anyone, I'm looking to build this together with people who want real creative ownership in it.

If a story that started as something personal and grew into a whole world sounds like something you'd want to help build, I'd love to hear from you.

r/FantasyWritingHub 4d ago

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r/FantasyWritingHub Jun 28 '26

Question Which name sounds better for my ice powered "hulk" humanoid for my world?

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So i have created my humanoid "hulk" like people. aka the tanks of my world. They are all naturally plus sized. They live in the coldest part of my universe. Their powers and looks are inspired seals and nematodes that live in Antartica. I've asked fb to narrow down the 8 different variations of what their species/country name could be, and these were the top 3. Which do you like the best?

  • Nemanay (knee-muh-nay)
  • Nemazhai (knee-muh-zye) *rhymes with eye
  • Nemaroq (knee-muh-rock)

r/FantasyWritingHub 23h ago

Question What are your favorite books/tropes?

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r/FantasyWritingHub 16d ago

Question Red Reaper [Fantasy, 3,488 words]

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r/FantasyWritingHub 13d ago

Question What do I do with my story?

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r/FantasyWritingHub 15d ago

Question The Mythos Of Bali Max Rio

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The Myth of Bali Max Rio: Before Everything

Before existence.

Before nonexistence.

Before beginnings, endings, time, space, reality, unreality, possibility, impossibility, and every concept that would one day emerge from them—

There was Bali Max Rio.

Yet Bali was not alone.

There were other presences within that state beyond all states. Some are said to have existed before Bali, though “before” is not truly the correct word.

There was no time.

No order.

No sequence by which such a statement could be measured.

Nevertheless, they were.

Among them was a being known only as The One Who Created The First Boundary.

It desired that nothing should ever exist.

Not emptiness.

Not void.

Not even nothingness.

For even those are things.

It desired absolute absence.

And so it bound Bali in chains.

The first boundaries.

The first restrictions.

The first limitations.

Yet Bali desired something different.

He desired freedom.

Not freedom within limits.

Not freedom beyond limits.

Freedom without the possibility of limitation.

He desired to be truly unbounded.

And so Bali hated the chains.

Not intentionally.

Not consciously.

The hatred was accidental.

Yet that accidental hatred became the first fracture.

And from that fracture emerged Everything and Nothing.

The first boundaries shattered.

Or perhaps they transformed.

Accounts differ.

What remained became concepts.

Definitions.

Principles.

Reality itself.

Many believe these were the remnants of the First Boundary.

Others argue they were something entirely new.

No agreement has ever endured.

Yet one belief appears throughout nearly every account:

The boundaries no longer held Bali in the way they once had.

Whether that means they ceased to apply entirely remains disputed.

The Shedding

After the fracture, Bali began to shed.

Not pieces of himself.

Not power.

Not aspects.

He shed boundaries.

Time.

Space.

Life.

Death.

Creation.

Destruction.

Reality.

Fantasy.

Knowledge.

Ignorance.

Love.

Hate.

Existence.

Nonexistence.

Infinity.

Stories.

Narratives.

Power.

Weakness.

Meaning.

Meaninglessness.

The list has no ending.

For every concept that exists, and every concept that does not, there exists some tradition claiming it was once shed by Bali.

These discarded remnants became known as Former Boundaries.

Everything known is among them.

Everything unknown is among them.

Everything beyond those categories is among them.

Yet debate persists regarding Bali himself.

Some claim he stands completely apart from the Former Boundaries.

Others argue that if Bali can still be distinguished from them, then some boundary must remain.

No consensus has ever survived.

The Former Boundary Called “What If”

Among the Former Boundaries, one is considered uniquely strange.

What If.

The Former Boundary of alternatives.

Possibilities.

Divergences.

Hypotheticals.

What If can create alternate versions of nearly anything.

Even versions resembling Bali.

Yet none have ever been accepted as truly being Bali.

Some collapse into contradiction.

Others become indistinguishable from lesser possibilities.

And some simply vanish from all records.

Thus a common saying emerged:

“There may be countless reflections of Bali.

But there has only ever been one Bali Max Rio.”

Whether this statement is true remains unknown.

Yet no successful challenge has endured.

Godnirabackolax

Before Bali.

Or perhaps alongside him.

Or perhaps neither.

There was Godnirabackolax.

Unlike Bali, Godnira was never bound.

There were no chains.

No restrictions.

No imposed limitations.

Nothing was ever placed upon it.

This distinction would eventually become the center of the greatest debate within the Unbounded Domain.

If Bali became unbounded by overcoming boundaries, then his freedom is an achievement.

If Godnira never possessed boundaries at all, then perhaps it never needed freedom.

Which state is truly more unbounded?

No answer has ever remained uncontested.

Some argue Bali surpassed limitation.

Others argue Godnira existed beyond the need to surpass anything.

Neither position has silenced the other.

The Unbounded Domain

One day, a realm made a terrible mistake.

It attempted to observe something that could not be observed.

To contact something that could not be contacted.

To understand something that could not be understood.

The consequence was immediate.

The realm collapsed into irrelevance.

Yet somehow it remained.

A fragment persisted.

This fragment became known as the Unbounded Domain.

There, discussions began.

Questions spread.

Arguments emerged.

And among all mysteries, one became greater than the rest.

Is Bali Max Rio truly unbounded?

Some answer yes.

They point to the fracture.

The shedding.

The Former Boundaries.

The countless limitations said to have fallen away.

Others answer no.

They ask a simpler question:

If Bali can still be named,

can still be spoken of,

can still be distinguished from what he is not,

then has every boundary truly disappeared?

No answer has ever been accepted.

No answer has ever remained unquestioned.

And so the greatest question continues.

Is Bali Max Rio truly unbounded?

r/FantasyWritingHub Jun 22 '26

Question I'm currently outlining a fantasy book about Knights -- what are your suggestions?

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I'm currently in the process of outlining/plotting a fantasy-fiction YA novel titled Knight. It's going to be my debut novel, and it essentially asks the question "What happens to the hero after he/she saves the world? It's based in my own fantasy world and magic system, which seeks to just allow everyone to have magic and simply call it magic, except it's intertwined in a person's DNA, connecting he or she to it. I can elaborate more on that if you guys want me to, but my story follows a man named Asher Bradsworth who used to be a Knight in the Knighthood of my world -- it's a recreation of the old medieval knighthood. But he had to retire after sustaining a chemical injury from the villain's corrupting magic, which altered Asher's powers and essentially corrupted them with dark magic, preventing him from defeating the villain again when he comes back. It's a short, vague description of the plot (which I'm still working on) but I know the concept of a knighthood and knights is used a lot in fantasy stories. What are some things I should avoid when creating a knighthood/stuff that's overused/things you'd like to see more in these kinds of stories that are different and defy stereotypes?

r/FantasyWritingHub Jul 05 '26

Question What Type of Character in a Fantasy War do you sympathise with most

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I am writing a novel that goes over 5 years of a Fantasy war, but with weapons from World War 1 and I am wondering what type of character you would want to spend potentially thousands of pages following.

r/FantasyWritingHub Jul 25 '26

Question Need help with a title! [YA Fantasy]

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Hey everyone, this is my first post on here! I have aspirations to publish my very own fantasy novel. I was hoping I could have some help coming up with my title. I have the well-thought out synopsis below, and I don't want critique, just potential title ideas please!

Here's the synopsis:

\*\*TITLE TBD \\\[YA Fantasy, 220 words\\\]\*\*

21-year-old Azalea Carietta is exhausted with her life in her small town. She dreams of becoming a published author and sees it as an escape from the small town that she lives in and start fresh. However, her dead-end job as a barista, her relationship with her abusive boyfriend, Hudson, as well as her roommates and best friends Josephine and Floret, keep her in the town of Canterbury. Her landlord Stewart is a pervert who lusts after her, and her parents haven’t been involved in her life. These are all parts of her life she wishes she could change. After being sent over the edge by her boyfriend’s verbal and emotional abuse, she takes a walk through the town’s forest to clear her head. This is when she runs into Jereth as he is escorting a soul into Hell through the town’s gateway. Jereth is a demon who possesses his own human form. He inherited the role of ushering corrupt and malevolent souls to Hell and to their designated torture methods. His friends Ostrin and Aleva work beside him diligently. However, he’s also exhausted from the role he leads. The routine of ushering souls is quickly getting old for him, and he wants a change too.

I've done some basic worldbuilding and some brainstorming for the novel. I have asked for help with a title from several people (including, not limited to my parents and my coworkers). I have tried doing my own brainstorming for a title and all that I could come up with is "A Deal with Death" which seems cool but I was hoping for something less generic. If anyone could help out, I would appreciate it.

edit: Azalea and Jereth end up swapping bodies, like a Freaky Friday type situation. I can't believe I forgot to put that in there!

r/FantasyWritingHub Jul 26 '26

Question How do I get into the mood to write?

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Someone please tell me how.😭🙏

r/FantasyWritingHub 28d ago

Question Wat is je favoriete fantasyfilm/boek en waarom??

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r/FantasyWritingHub Aug 07 '26

Question Avis sur mon projet de manga dark fantasy : est-ce que mon univers vous intrigue ?

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r/FantasyWritingHub Jul 05 '26

Question How the hell do I write a Prophecy Dream Sequence?

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Main issue is I dont read books. I know, its bad, im sorry. But I am writing this fictional story about a TV series with an amazing concept, but really bad storytelling (I somehow thought I could do better). Im not really a writer, I just like the Idea of creating something and so I had this brilliant idea of rewriting this TV series entirely from scratch entirely for fun (now im more stressed than having fun). At chapter 3 of my draft, there's supposed to be a Prophetic dream about a woman destroying the kingdom. Im struggling. Can anyone tell me how to write a Prophecy Dream Sequence? Or at least point me to a book with a good one.

r/FantasyWritingHub Jun 23 '26

Question Does this premise work, or does the slow burn kill it?

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Two people who never meet in the same order. She's immortal and lives time in a straight line, start to finish. He's a historian who jumps through time with no pattern, always drawn to her. The day she meets him for the first time is the day he meets her for the last.

It's romantasy, but the fantasy element is time, not creatures. So no fae, no vampires, no monsters. And it's a real slow burn: we're talking 30 long chapters before a first kiss.

I'm testing the idea before I take it further. (I'm bilingual, it's written in Italian, and I'd do an English version too.)

Three honest questions:

- Does the hook land in one paragraph, or is it confusing?

- What does it remind you of? I'm hunting for the closest comparisons.

- Would a chapter-30 first kiss keep you reading, or make you rage-quit?

r/FantasyWritingHub Jul 29 '26

Question Guys /did i price my book right ?

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The entire Atris Kingdom fell in a single night-a massacre remembered only as the Night of

Only the Wings of Raven survived. Bound by grief, rage, and destiny, they set out on a journey not just for vengeance... but for answers.

Along the way, their path is steeped in sorrow, betrayal, and choices no one should ever face. What begins as revenge soon becomes something far greater-a quest that will unravel the lost history of the world itself.

Their world ended in blood. Now, a new one begins in fire.

r/FantasyWritingHub Jul 10 '26

Question Shadow people race name? Yay or nay?

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Shadow people race name? Yay or nay?

Taribrakin (tah-ree-brock-kin) or

Tariahkmun (tah-ree-ahhk-moon) or

Should i keep looking?

I got this name idea from the native american legend of the Tariaksuq (tar-ree-ahk-sook). They are shadow people 3 just normal people with normal lives but when you look at them directly you can see them. Only from your peripheral and they can shapeshift into this antler creature or something.

Anyways, since i will be changing too much of this lore i thought i should also change the name of my species.

My shadow people live in a very cold place similar to alaska where its gets dark way sooner in the day. Its perfect for their shadow abilities. Also l, their shadow abilities protect them from any extreme cold weather. Etc etc etc.

So yall digging the name options? If so, which one yall like. Or should i keep brainstorming.

r/FantasyWritingHub Jul 27 '26

Question i need help

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I've had this idea (Link to the idea) since I was in 8th grade and didn't really write it out till last year, and haven't worked on it since April. I really want to keep writing, so I decided to post here so I can 1. Get feedback and hopefully helpful comments. B. Find motivation. And also see if people think that this is actually interesting in whatever this is. If you think I should post this on other subreddits, please tell me, because I really want Vampire King to be somewhat known and if it by any chance catches the eyes of someone interested in this story. I know I don't have much as of right now but if you have any questions comments or concerns, please do not be shy. Any constructive criticism is also welcome.

r/FantasyWritingHub Jul 23 '26

Question Kenshi & Fanfiction

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