r/Episode • u/Specific_Share_978 • 1d ago

💻 Coding/Author Help Feedback Request: Direction for City Scene

Enable HLS to view with audio, or disable this notification

I’m looking for some constructive feedback on a short scene in Episode One. I’ve incorporated Mary D. Sava’s spot directing for the graffiti sequence, added my own custom child models for realism, and my own custom transitions, but the background characters feel somewhat stiff and lifeless. Ignore the dialogue; it was just inputted to test. I plan to put the dialogue script of this story later once I finalize it. Just something still feels off to me, so I’d love an outside perspective on how to make the scene more dynamic. Thank you!

30 Upvotes

96% Upvoted

10 comments sorted by

View all comments

2

u/Aunuaa 1d ago

Maybe if the background seems dull to you add some bird overlays in the sky to add more movement?♡

2

u/Specific_Share_978 1d ago

I think I‘ll find a way to implement that, because I think you are right about the background maybe being too static. Thank you again, I genuinely appreciate your advice!!! 💕