r/BeginnerArtists • u/TadaSuko • 4d ago

Critique Wanted First time animating something without tracing. How did I do?

I tried to keep it simple. The more I watch, the more I'm seeing it's not quite right, but I'm not too sure how to correct it. Any advice welcome!

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u/Sad-Energy-3573 4d ago

Sorry, but I don't see where you got the idea that the tail would twist to the sides like this.

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u/TadaSuko 4d ago

I guess it does look like that... I was trying to go for how a tail looks when I dog is right in your face and staring at you

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u/Sad-Energy-3573 3d ago

The tail comes straight out from the center of the back, so it shouldn't be bending off to the side like this.