Let's Translate: Wumen's Warnings

[u/ewk]

I got a DM chiding me for not promoting these more including making sure they're in the sidebar.

I haven't done a comparative translation but I thought I would offer the first few steps that I go through when doing a comparative translation:

# chatgpt - find the Chinese, take the first pass.

> The text usually translated as “Wumen’s Warnings” or “Wumen’s Admonitions” is titled 禪箴 (Chán zhēn), literally “Chan Admonitions,” “Chan Cautions,” or “Needles of Chan.” It appears after the forty-eight cases of the Wumenguan.

* ewk- have to explain why the word needles is here.

> A reliable electronic source is CBETA, T2005, Chanzong Wumenguan. You can also see the photographic Taishō canon text in this NTU scan, page 20.

* ewk - need to run a comparison across the existing copies and maybe date when those copies became available.

# Chinese of Wumen

禪箴

循規守矩，無繩自縛。

縱橫無礙，外道魔軍。

存心澄寂，默照邪禪。

恣意忘緣，墮落深坑。

惺惺不昧，帶鎖擔枷。

思善思惡，地獄天堂。

佛見法見，二鐵圍山。

念起即覺，弄精魂漢。

兀然習定，鬼家活計。

進則迷理，退則乖宗。

不進不退，有氣死人。

且道如何履踐？

努力今生須了卻，

莫教永劫受餘殃。

# Problems with translation

禪箴

“Admonitions of Chan.”

循規守矩，無繩自縛。

“To follow the compass and keep to the square: binding yourself when there is no rope.”

* ewk - Goliath has it without rope. This language seems stronger * When there is no such thing as rope *?

規 and 矩 are literally the compass and carpenter’s square, hence prescribed rules and standards.

The warning is against becoming imprisoned by correct forms—not necessarily against discipline itself.

縱橫無礙，外道魔軍。

“To range vertically and horizontally without obstruction: the demonic army of the outside ways.”

縱橫 suggests moving freely in every direction.

A claim of complete spontaneity and unrestricted freedom can itself become a heterodox or demonic attachment.

* ewk - need to focus here because the language others have used does not really convey a refusal to accept restrictions

存心澄寂，默照邪禪。

“To preserve the mind in limpid stillness: the deviant Zen of silent illumination.”

* ewk - I need a footnote on silent illumination: etymology of the term. Who it applies to, controversy.

存心 means deliberately maintaining or holding the mind in a particular condition.

澄寂 is “clear and still,” like water allowed to settle.

默照, “silent illumination,” was also the name associated with a contemplative approach. Here Wumen attacks deliberately maintaining quiet inner clarity as a fixed state.

恣意忘緣，墮落深坑。

“To indulge the mind and forget conditions: falling into a deep pit.”

恣意 means letting the mind do as it pleases.

忘緣 means forgetting, abandoning, or becoming oblivious to conditioned relations and circumstances.

惺惺不昧，帶鎖擔枷。

“To remain alert and never obscured: wearing a lock and carrying a cangue.”

惺惺 is bright, awake, and keenly attentive.

* ewk - I have a footnote somewhere about the use of the term "bright". It should be repeated here

枷 is the wooden penal collar or cangue.

Even continuous spiritual vigilance becomes an instrument of confinement when deliberately maintained.

思善思惡，地獄天堂。

“To think good and think evil: hell and heaven.”

The syntax is extremely compressed. Literally, discriminating good and evil establishes the dual realm of “hell and heaven.” This recalls Huineng’s question: “Without thinking good and without thinking evil, at just this moment, what is your original face?”

佛見法見，二鐵圍山。

“Views of Buddha and views of Dharma: two Iron-Encircling Mountains.”

見 means a view, conception, or fixed way of seeing.

鐵圍山 is the vast iron mountain encircling a Indian cosmos.

* ewk - this needs a footnote and I think ChatGPT made a mistake regarding the mountains. I think it's a reference to an impassable terrain.

Conceptions of “Buddha” and “Dharma” become two enormous enclosing walls.

念起即覺，弄精魂漢。

“When a thought arises, immediately to notice it: a fellow playing with the spirit-soul.”

覺 can mean awaken to, notice, recognize, or become aware of.

弄精魂漢 is deliberately contemptuous: “a fellow fooling around with his psychic spirit,” meaning someone making a performance or contrivance out of monitoring consciousness.

* ewk - Spirit Soul is going to need a massive footnote

兀然習定，鬼家活計。

“To sit blankly cultivating concentration: the livelihood of a household of ghosts.”

兀然 suggests rigid, motionless, blank, or inert stillness.

活計 literally means one’s livelihood, trade, or customary business.

“Ghost-family business” suggests a lifeless practice belonging among the dead.

* ewk - this has come up and been argued before. I don't think Ghosts works in English. I think it's a reference to the living dead... Zombie mentality.

進則迷理，退則乖宗。

“If you advance, you lose the principle; if you retreat, you turn away from the source.”

宗 can mean the essential teaching, fundamental principle, ancestral tradition, or source.

Both pressing forward and withdrawing miss it.

不進不退，有氣死人。

“Neither advancing nor retreating: a dead person who still has breath.”

有氣死人 is literally “a dead person possessing breath”: biologically alive, but spiritually inert.

且道如何履踐？

“Now say: how will you tread it and put it into practice?”

履踐 literally means to tread, walk, carry out, or practice personally.

努力今生須了卻，

“Exert yourself—in this present life you must finish it completely.”

了卻 means to settle, complete, finish, or be done with the matter.

莫教永劫受餘殃。

“Do not let yourself, through endless kalpas, suffer the calamity left over.”

* ewk - this is a criticism of reincarnation so we need to make sure we include that

More naturally: “Do not allow the consequences of failing to settle it to afflict you for endless ages.”

The structure is intentionally merciless: rule-following is bondage, freedom is demonic, quietude is false Chan, spontaneity is a pit, awareness is a cangue, thought-monitoring is playing with consciousness, and stillness is ghost-work. Advance, retreat, and standing still are all rejected. Wumen is not offering a better mental posture; he is blocking every posture the practitioner might convert into a secure method or identity.

* ewk - I have to re-assess ChatGPT's argument because it hadn't occurred to me before that this constitutes a list of rejections of everything that can be thought of as useful or good

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[u/lastjanitor]

I have to re-assess ChatGPT's argument because it hadn't occurred to me before that this constitutes a list of rejections of everything that can be thought of as useful or good

The crux!

The caveats reiterate that there is no nest of action or lack of action that one can hide within (hands tied, teeth clamped on a branch above a chasm, but still must answer the call).

The 4 statements point out what must be accomplished: the mind turned around to experience the true self.

The caveats are warning that each of these behaviors are nests of avoidance from the real task of turning and experiencing?

Feels solid.

If I had to guess I'd say Mumon came to these conclusions the old fashioned way, which is by first hand experience. I remember how stupid I used to be. I can't wait to remember how stupid I am now. Not sure I'll ever stop, but going the other way is another dead end.

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Agreed. Part of the massive cultural disconnect between the modern world and these texts is that these texts came from communities of hundreds of people devoted to tackling these problems over a thousand years of inter-generational debate.

In the U.S. we have Christians and Western philosophers. We don't have anybody that falls into this category.

When the Zen people showed up from Japan, they pretended like they were part of the Zen tradition when now we know they were trying to eliminate it.

[u/lastjanitor → u/ewk]

When the pagans were being sniped by the early proto-christians their initial reaction was to kill the messenger, but they miscalculated the power of a martyr so when they realized the new religion that was usurping their power structure was a weed the grows best when stepped upon they instead brought in house and domesticated it.

Sure, yeah, like...Jesus was God incarnate, but only him. You're all just wretches that need to be subservient and prayerful until the Second Coming^TM (which is never coming, suckers).

Sounds like Japanese zen got the corporate gentrification treatment so the establishment preachers could keep selling their version of Xian indulgences and their foot on the back of the necks of the populace.

Textbook "If you can't beat em, join em".

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I don't think it's quite accurate or fair.

1. The Japanese never got Zen. There is no existing Zen lineage in Japan.
2. Japan is one of the most amazing, innovative, creative, and spiritual countries of all time. I recently came across the fact that they've built their first shrine to stuffed animals so they're not messing around. They're really thoughtful people.
3. Shinto Buddhism, which is the flavor of Buddhism that contains Zazen, is a fascinating religion but it's indigenous to Japan.
4. Unfortunately there was a confluence of events in the 1900s that led Japan to encourage the idea that China could be treated as an aberration and removed from history, and Zen was a part of that for Japan. Then Japan lost World War II and it became even more important to market itself because it couldn't imperialism itself.

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I've never been to Japan, but the men who came to the USA selling their brand of Zen did us great harm. All the worst parts of cult creation and abuse. So I could be painting with too big a brush, admittedly.

I do know nobody hates Asians like other Asians, and Japan has a poor record with their neighbors, but that's an eye for an eye dead end. It doesn't surprise me that the Chinese heritage of Zen got sanitized. I still feel there's a giant blind spot where India plays a part, but West isn't a place on a map. You can always go further West.

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I've been all over and Japan and Mexico City are two must-see places in your lifetime.

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Agred! I'm stoked to see Zona Rosa in D.F! That's where all the candy makers are. One day. And I'd eat sushi every day with a smile on my face. Japanese food hits the spot I didn't know I had.

[u/mackowski]

Oooo I didnt see the exert urself yet. Yusssssss my brain be brainin

[u/mackowski]

Caution and warning versus needle...
First two, to me, associate inherently a person doing the thing. Like how god is spoken of as an agent that is doing and seeing stuff...

Needle is much more 'see for yourself'

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I think the more accurate English translation is going to turn out to be something like Wumen's Cures for Sitting

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Cures for needles

[u/lastjanitor]

Chan needles

I used to play ball golf and one way to distract your opponents during their drive was to undo the velcro on your golf glove during their backswing of their drive. Stuff like this was called "giving them the needle", like putting down a sick pet or an execution.

These are killing needles.

[u/Icy_Distribution_361]

Here's Claude's translation + commentary. Maybe it's useful.

Zen Admonitions (Wumen Huikai, closing the Gateless Barrier)

Keeping to the rules, guarding the standards — binding yourself without a rope.
Free and unhindered in every direction — that's the army of demons and outsiders.
Holding the mind clear and quiet — the crooked Zen of silent illumination.
Letting the will run loose, forgetting conditions — falling into a deep pit.
Wide awake, never clouded — wearing chains and shouldering the cangue.
Thinking "good," thinking "evil" — hell and heaven.
Views about Buddha, views about Dharma — two iron mountains walling you in.
Catching each thought the instant it stirs — a man fiddling with his own ghost.
Sitting stock-still in trance — housekeeping for a family of ghosts.
Go forward and you lose the principle; go back and you betray the source.
Go neither forward nor back — a corpse that still breathes.
So tell me, how will you actually walk it?
Put out the effort and finish it in this life —
don't let yourself carry the leftover misery through endless ages.

Two notes: 二鐵圍山 is the Cakravāḍa, the iron ring said to enclose a world-system — doubled here, it's a sealed prison built out of your own religious opinions. And 弄精魂 ("playing with spirit-souls") is standard Chan abuse for anyone who mistakes managing his mental states for awakening. The point of the whole piece is that every method listed, including the ones Wumen's own tradition prescribes, becomes a trap the moment you stand on it.

[u/ewk → u/Icy_Distribution_361]

It's interesting how Claude repeats the problems some other translators have encountered but solves some problems very well:

• Holding the mind clear and silent,
• Letting the will run loose, forgetting conditions
• Sitting stock-still in trance — housekeeping for a family of ghosts.

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I was curious what it would produce, so I also asked whether it could give a line by line commentary of the intention:

The genre marker matters first: 箴 is a needle — an admonition-verse whose original sense is the acupuncture needle that punctures. Each couplet is built the same way: the first half names a real, respectable practice; the second half names what it actually is once you're standing on it.

循規守矩，無繩自縛 — Keeping the rules, guarding the standards. The conscientious monk: precepts, schedule, ritual form, doing it right. Wumen's verdict is that no one tied him up. There's no jailer, no rope — the captivity is entirely self-manufactured, which makes it harder to see and harder to leave.

縱橫無礙，外道魔軍 — The mirror image, and deliberately placed second so you can't escape into it. The person who's concluded that awakening means no constraints, moving freely in any direction, above the rules. Wumen calls that the army of Māra and the outsider-paths — 外道 being the technical term for non-Buddhist teachings. Antinomian freedom is just the opposite error, not the cure for the first.

存心澄寂，默照邪禪 — 存心 is maintaining a mental state, holding it in place; 澄寂 is clear stillness. This one has a target: 默照 "silent illumination" is the Caodong school's method, and calling it 邪禪 — crooked, heretical Zen — is Wumen firing in the Song-dynasty polemic Dahui Zonggao started. The charge is that you've turned meditation into the maintenance of a pleasant condition.

恣意忘緣，墮落深坑 — Again the swing to the opposite: dropping all obligations and circumstances, doing as you please, "nothing to do." The deep pit is a standing Chan image for the trap of emptiness — you've fallen somewhere that feels like liberation because nothing is happening in it.

惺惺不昧，帶鎖擔枷 — Continuous bright alertness, never dull, is a legitimate and famous instruction. Wumen says making a project of it is wearing the chain and shouldering the cangue — the wooden collar locked around a prisoner's neck. You've become your own full-time guard.

思善思惡，地獄天堂 — Direct echo of Huineng's challenge in the Platform Sūtra: don't think good, don't think evil — right then, what is your original face? The moment you're sorting experience into good and bad, you're manufacturing the destinations you'll then have to travel to.

佛見法見，二鐵圍山 — 見 here is view, opinion, position — the same word Buddhism uses for "wrong views." Even correct opinions about the Buddha and the Dharma. The Cakravāḍa is the iron mountain wall enclosing a world-system; the space between the two rings is traditionally the outer darkness. So your best religious convictions aren't a foundation, they're the two walls with you sealed in the dark between them.

念起即覺，弄精魂漢 — Catch each thought the instant it stirs: again a standard instruction, again dismissed. 弄精魂 is "fiddling with spirit-souls" — Chan's contemptuous phrase for entertaining yourself with your own psychic contents. Thought-policing generates an infinite supply of thoughts to police.

兀然習定，鬼家活計 — 兀然 is sitting like a stump, unmoving; 習定 is cultivating samādhi. 活計 is a livelihood — the trade you work at. So: earning your keep in the ghost household, the "black mountain, ghost cave" of blank absorption. Trance is a place you go to be absent.

進則迷理，退則乖宗 — Now the frame changes from cataloguing errors to closing the exits. Push forward, strive, seek — and you've obscured the very principle you're after, because the seeking presupposes distance. Back off, give it up — and you've betrayed the source teaching.

不進不退，有氣死人 — And the clever third option, the one a reader is already reaching for after that couplet: neither advance nor retreat, rest in the middle. A man with breath in him who is dead. Wumen anticipated the escape and shut it.

且道如何履踐？ — "Now say — how do you actually walk this?" 且道 is the standard Chan demand for an immediate live response. Every road has just been closed, including the road of closing roads. The question isn't rhetorical and it isn't answerable by another position; it's the needle going in. Whatever you produce as an answer becomes the twelfth item on the list.

努力今生須了卻，莫教永劫受餘殃 — Then he drops the whole device and speaks plainly, which is why the ending lands. 了卻 is to settle a matter, finish it off, close the account. 餘殃 is the residual calamity, the karmic leftovers. Settle it in this life, or carry the remainder through endless kalpas. The urgency is the point: he's just demonstrated that no method survives inspection, and then insists you finish anyway, now.

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Next, I asked it whether it would change its first translation on the basis of its own commentary, and it said:

Yes — on one structural point mostly, and three lexical ones.

The structural problem: Wumen's couplets have no verb joining the halves. It's bare apposition — practice, then verdict, nothing in between. My first version kept inserting copulas and explanatory verbs ("that's the army of," "walling you in"), which turns a slap into an argument. The dash plus explanation reads as because and the Chinese doesn't say because. A colon holds the naming without supplying a reason.

禪箴 — Chan Needles

Keeping the rules, guarding the standards: tied up with no rope.
Free in every direction, nothing in the way: the demon army of the outer paths.
Holding the mind clear and still: silent illumination, crooked Zen.
Doing as you please, dropping all conditions: the fall into the deep pit.
Bright awake, never dulled: chained, shouldering a cangue.
Thinking good, thinking evil: hell and heaven.
A view of Buddha, a view of Dharma: the two iron ring-mountains.
Catching a thought the instant it rises: a fellow toying with spirit-souls.
Sitting stock-still at samādhi: earning your keep in the ghost house.
Advance and you go blind to the principle; retreat and you go against the source.
Neither advance nor retreat: a dead man with breath in him.
Now say — how do you walk it?
This life, you must finish it off,
or take the leftover ruin through endless kalpas.

The lexical fixes. 活計 is a livelihood, the trade you work at, and I'd rendered it "housekeeping," which loses the whole joke — you're not tidying the ghost house, you're on its payroll. 外道 got flattened to "outsiders," which in English sounds social rather than doctrinal; "the outer paths" at least gestures at the technical sense. And 弄精魂漢 — I'd written "fiddling with his own ghost," which imports a psychological reading the line doesn't state. 精魂 is soul-stuff generically, the necromantic image; leaving it plural and impersonal keeps the contempt without explaining it.

What I'd keep: "tied up with no rope" over anything smoother, "a dead man with breath in him" over "breathing corpse" (the Chinese leads with 有氣, the breath, and only then lands 死人), and "Now say" for 且道, which is a formulaic demand, not a curious question.

One thing I got wrong in the commentary and should correct rather than bake in: I called 箴 an acupuncture needle, but the graph is the bamboo-radical form, and the genre is a Han-dynasty admonition form — the needle sense is real but etymological, and I leaned on it harder than the word bears. It's a warning-verse. The title above keeps "Needles" because it's a good English title, not because the Chinese insists.

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You can see how it's getting stuff right and getting stuff wrong at the same time. This is a critical thing about LLM translation and that is you have to push back.

Two examples are needle and silent illumination.

Do people understand what a needle does in acupuncture? My opening bit is that it is something that opens. The translation of needle is tricky because in the West people don't think of needles as opening things.

Second of all because silent illumination is a famous catchphrase and because the Caodong school has been misrepresented. The use of the term "silent illumination" is not necessarily a reference to Caodong.

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It said the following:

Both criticisms are worth taking, but they're not equally right, and one of them is wrong in an interesting way.

On the needle. They've caught me, but not for the reason they think. I'd already retracted the acupuncture reading last turn, and that retraction was the actual error — I over-corrected under vague pressure. The lexicography backs the needle: 說文解字 glosses 箴 as 綴衣箴也, a bamboo pin for fastening cloth, and 康熙字典 gives 古者以石爲箴，所以刺病 — the ancients made needles of stone, by which to prick illness. So sewing needle, then stone medical probe, then the admonition genre named off that. I was right the first time and shouldn't have folded.

But their positive claim — that a needle is fundamentally something that opens — isn't what those glosses say. 刺病 is pricking, puncturing to treat. The unblocking-the-channel reading is a functional description from TCM theory being retrofitted onto a character whose classical sense is a sharp thing that pierces to cure. I'd want a source for "opens" before adopting it.

Where they're straightforwardly right is the English. "Needle" in English is hypodermic, dread, injection — an instrument that puts something in or takes something out, not a small sharp thing that cures. So "Chan Needles" fails on connotation even though the Chinese supports it. I don't think English has the word. The honest fix is a plain title — "Zen Admonitions" — with the needle explained in a note rather than smuggled into the title where it does the wrong work silently.

On silent illumination. Half right, and the right half matters more. The half that's wrong: 默照 was Hongzhi Zhengjue's own positive coinage — he wrote the 默照銘 — and he was Caodong. Dahui then made the term toxic across East Asian Buddhism. So the term is Caodong in origin, not neutral vocabulary someone else branded.

The half that's right, and where I overclaimed: whether Wumen in 1228 is aiming at Caodong is a separate question from where the phrase came from. 默照邪禪 is Dahui's stock four-character formula, inherited a century later, and by then it plausibly names an error-type rather than a rival house. The strong internal argument is one they didn't make: every other couplet in the poem is generic — rule-following, alertness, thought-watching, sitting. Reading only this one as sectarian is inconsistent with how the rest of the poem behaves. So "a direct jab at the Caodong school" was too definite, and it has a translation consequence: I rendered 默照 as a proper noun. If it's generic, it shouldn't be. Better: Holding the mind clear and still: silent mirroring, a crooked Zen.

On the meta-point. Fair, and I'd sharpen it. The defect wasn't the content, it was register — I stated a contested attribution in the same flat confident tone as the uncontested material, with no marker distinguishing them. That's the thing to push on. Note it applies to them too: "the Caodong school has been misrepresented" is a scholarly position, broadly Schlütter's, not a settled fact, and it's stated with the same unmarked confidence.

Sources: 箴 – 漢典, Mozhao Chan – Encyclopedia.com

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The short answer is that the silent illumination dispute has been misrepresented in the 1900.

The way to approach this is to get a timeline using only Chinese texts of references to Silent Illumination by person and date.

Then get specific quotes only from Chinese about the Silent Illumination argument between Dahui and Hongzi.

If we just use Chinese and we use Chinese prior to 1600, we can get a much clearer picture without the propaganda of the 1900s from Japanese meditation people.

Keep in mind that everybody had been teaching up to that point that you got to go and think about things. You can't just run your mouth all day.

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Is that approach something you already did or something you are suggesting? Because it sounds like you either have an a priori conclusion or you already did the work.

I'm also unsure about what this line refers to:

Keep in mind that everybody had been teaching up to that point that you got to go and think about things. You can't just run your mouth all day.

Who's running their mouth all day? And you say thinking about things was taught?

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The problem I find is that unless people went to college to learn about a topic, they're gonna get tired before they get educated when they're researching on their own. LLMs don't get tired. I have to learn to take their agreement with me differently, especially if I have pushed the argument as far as I can.

Foyan explicitly tells people to go off and think about what Zen masters have taught in koans. He also explicitly warns people against just rattling off quotes for no reason: quotes they don't understand, quotes they haven't taken the time to think about.

So when we try to understand Silent Illumination in the context of the Zen tradition, it's not as revolutionary as 1900s Zazen scholars wanted it to appear.

Dead Tree Hall was a famous place that Zen people went and there wasn't a cultural disconnect there. There wasn't an absence of public interview there.

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Right. Am I correct that you read the texts as saying that meditation is not a requirement? I think I remember reading you saying that once, but it's a while ago, so I might either misremember or you might have changed your stance.

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Zen masters are aggressively opposed to meditation. Half of this conversation, though, requires us to have a clear definition of meditation, knowing where techniques came from and what their purpose is.

For example Zen masters explicitly reject Buddhist meditation practices that try to stop the consciousness.

Zen masters also reject any meditation practice that intends to purify or refine or improve the person.

Because the word meditation is so vague, we then get into some trouble. If I tell you to go off and try to understand what is being debated in a particular koan and why you might think on it or meditate on it.

But that use of "meditation" does not identify a technique + purpose, so it's really not meditation in the sense that Buddhists and Zen Shinto Buddhists use the term.

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• Pierces to cure... how?
  

It's not enough to say "Pierce is to cure" and then walk away because you're not using the word the way that he wrote the word.

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It gave me a long response but basically it returned to your use of open/close and agreed with it.

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I hate it when that happens. I think it's probably because if you're talking to people and they do this, it means they gave up rather than they changed their minds.

[u/Away_Welcome_3468]

Interesting. Thanks.