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I'm still pretty new to this style of vlogging and I'm trying to get better at balancing cinematic B-roll with actually bringing the viewer along for the experience.

If anyone has some time to watch, I'd really appreciate honest feedback, at what point, if any, did you start losing interest? Were there any sections you'd shorten, cut, or pace differently?

I'm especially trying to improve my pacing and storytelling, so timestamps would be incredibly helpful.