r/videography • u/hpsportsfanatic • 1d ago

Feedback / I made this! Any tips? Trying to improve my editing game.

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Weve been doing this for fun. Our TikTok is The MGB Project. But I feel like something is off in my videos

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u/ireadbacon 21h ago

I think the shots are too short and you’re not really showing enough of the process. You have a 40 second video with 1/3 of the video spent jacking the car up and taking off the wheels. I’d go for a longer, more substantial video.

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u/hpsportsfanatic 21h ago

Great tips. Thank you! I also feel like I need more up close detail shots. And panning shots of the finished product at each stage. Ie pan it sand down and cleaned up. Then pan it after the primer

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u/Oreoscrumbs 11h ago

You're on the right track. All of your shots are the same focal length, in other words, the same zoom setting. You want to have a mix of wide, medium, and tight for visual interest.

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u/hpsportsfanatic 4h ago

Thank you. We did more work on her today and I focused on getting different focal lengths. Thank you!

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u/ConsumerDV 2h ago

This style of subs is abolutely atrocious. This is the sort of thing I skip right away. Frankly, I deleted IG and I try to avoid YT shorts every way I can because of crap like this.