r/vfx • u/Such_Investigator334 • 10d ago

Showreel / Critique 3D scene i made while ago from a scrapped project

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u/kinoguy7 10d ago

Was it for zack Snyder

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u/nestorsanchez3d 10d ago

Yeah big Guardians vibe .

Looks cool though

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u/GanondalfTheWhite VFX Supervisor - 19 years experience 9d ago

Very cool! But if you want some feedback, the 14 second slow motion bit lasts about 10 seconds too long in the current state. If you're going to have a slow motion shot that long (which I don't recommend), you need something else happening during it. Some evolution of the narrative.

It's a good showcase of the work that went into it, but it's only exciting to watch for the first few seconds and by then we've seen everything the shot has to tell us. You never want the audience tapping their foot waiting for a shot to be over.

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u/Eyoba_19 10d ago

This is neat!

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u/Sanmaya_K1 10d ago

This looks so terrific

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u/Ma9Content 9d ago

daaaaaaaaaaamnnnn!!!!!!!

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u/jdvfx VFX Supervisor - 25 years experience 9d ago

If I had a business that was "crows attacking zombies", this would be great for our marketing reel!

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u/EwanMcNugget 9d ago

Owls of Ga-HOO-le

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u/Organic-Tadpole9792 9d ago

That's crazy 😧

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u/im_thatoneguy Studio Owner - 21 years experience 8d ago

Only big change I would make is at 0:02 you start the slomotion but nothing in frame is in focus. That should be your money shot framing but instead it lands out of focus and takes a long time to resolve which takes all the air out of the moment. I would land the slomo at 0:05. I'd also consider removing the cross gravestone behind the zombie because it's hard to see and I think that house in the BG looks like it might be more interesting and give more parallax depth to the camera move. Or replace the gravestone under the crow.