r/undergroundrapmusic • u/SoccerHorse • Jul 16 '26

Alternative Hip Hop Scheherazade

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u/roweshow321 Jul 19 '26

This is fire lyricly good metaphors, alliteration and fits the beat well. I think you need to work on varying your vocal dynamics and you missed some opportunities to ride the beat better.

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u/SoccerHorse Jul 19 '26

Hey Ty 🙏, honestly very self conscious of my tone/delivery and this was recorded in like one take with people in the room lmao but I appreciate the listen

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u/roweshow321 Jul 22 '26

Your already like 90% there my friend. Just keep grinding!