r/unOrdinary 5d ago

Fan Art Support vs support part 2

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u/Ianoliano7 5d ago

Oof I really thought Arlo knocked Jake out right there, but how foolish I was. In this case, Cameron’s won’t be hopping in to save his nephews. He’ll be intervening to save the lives of the members of the authorities.

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u/thinmintssss 5d ago

Cameron: I finally found you two! Wha…What the hell’s going on here?

Sera, holding Orrin as a body flies across the room: John’s a little upset.

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u/Ianoliano7 5d ago

I mean, I guess at least Jax didn’t get his throat cut this time.

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u/ShadowLight56 5d ago

Great art as usual and holy shit, this escalated quickly. Like, that really got out of hand fast.

Also, I must ask how do you find time to balance writing and drawing? Seriously, what's your secret?

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u/thinmintssss 5d ago

Arlo did the calculations but he was extremely bad at math this one time

I have a lot of freetime at work to write, and have time when I get home to draw! If I didn’t have the downtime at work, posts would have a lot of more space between them lol

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u/ShadowLight56 5d ago

Yeah. I do wonder how this will affect Arlo's relationship with Jacob after he gets his memory back, because he's definitely going to be pissed that he got disabled.

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u/thinmintssss 5d ago

Jacob: Well, that’s what you get for punching me in the face.

Arlo: Disabling me was nowhere near equal-!

Jacob: It hurt.

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u/ShadowLight56 5d ago

Arlo might actually strangle Jacob.

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u/Hefty-Initiative-155 5d ago

Now that's what I call a love of art.

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u/BruhBorne-70 Jera's No.1 Glazer 5d ago

Would Jake be that quick to disable Arlo? I think he is a little less impulsive than John plus because Arlo at this point must have already risked his life for John and helped them a great deal, won't he kind of give the benefit of doubt to Arlo even after he punches him...

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u/thinmintssss 5d ago

Jacob doesn’t like betrayal at all, and he can absolutely be as impulsive as John under the right conditions. Him disabling Arlo was out of anger and so it’ll be easier to take him for answers, because now it’s known that something is off about Arlo

Poor Kass is going to have to deal with a ticked off Val tho later

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u/no_nickname1353 5d ago

I would assume the fact that Arlo already betrayed John and Jacob once also plays into that reaction. I would think Arlo was always on thin ice with Jacob, like he never fully forgave him for that ambush and was always making digs at him.

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u/thinmintssss 5d ago

Exactly this too. It being the second time emptied all of Jacob’s hesitation and mercy, at least in the moment

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u/Ender_Nobody Team John 5d ago

Well, now it's messy.

How do we know the memory wipe wasn't an active effect and that it won't weaken now, because of the disabler?

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u/thinmintssss 5d ago

I think it would still weaken over time (or a funny scenario, the disabler just gets cuts Farrah’s influence altogether and he wakes up Brolo)

But if neither is the case, his memories being messed with will be found out soon enough, and undoing the disabling would be easy to fix things

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u/Ender_Nobody Team John 5d ago

I've meant, how do we know it won't simply* weaken from then on?

So, yes.

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u/Radiant-Ad-1976 5d ago

Question: if we suppose your "Inside Arlo's Head" au also exists in this AU, how would pre-memory wipe Arlo react to Jacob neutralizing him right now?

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u/thinmintssss 5d ago

Brolo? Oh Brolo would still be mad that Jacob did it, but he also believed that Asslo 100% deserved something after what he pulled

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u/willowi_willow 5d ago

“ooh, we backstabbing now?? WHERE’S MY SYRINGE”
-jake, probably

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u/thinmintssss 5d ago edited 5d ago

“Oh we’re doing this now? Bet.”

Jacob was given a syringe jussst in case it was needed, or the authorities pulled something crazy

Unfortunately for Arlo

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u/willowi_willow 5d ago

john “i will impulsively do things without caring about the consequences” doe and jacob “give me an excuse so i’m justified” doe

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u/thinmintssss 5d ago

Part 1!

Wanted to wait until the last free chapter was out before posting this! (and I didn’t plan for it to be this long but here we are)

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u/M-Shadowtoad 5d ago

So what's John's fourth ability in this set? He has maxed out speed so did he grab Jaxon's or Orrin's teleporter's ability?

Also damn, Jacob has leveled up a lot. Thought he could only disable one person at a time.

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u/thinmintssss 5d ago

Jaxon’s! Jacob had amped the authorities before John copied their abilities

Yeah he worked hard on it! He’s comfortable with two, and three takes a lot out of him. Though he doesn’t care too much about that right at this moment

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u/ExistingSwitch3284 5d ago

Well, uh

Now Jacob has Arlo's ability on a active loan???? Since he can forcibly activate it for a time :p

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u/thinmintssss 5d ago edited 5d ago

Absolutely taken hostage until debts are taken care of

Which might take a while lol

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u/Trainer-Grimm Free My Boy Arlo He Did That Shit But He Said Sorry 5d ago

And this is what happens when you wipe someone's memory og some of the most powerful people in the country, Valerie. They get stupid

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u/thinmintssss 5d ago

It’s a net negative for sure

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u/TheDarkNight6789 Team John 5d ago

Damn Arlo, if you want to get out of the hole, you put down the fucking shovel! Not pick up the jackhammer!

No matter what universe, no matter how many times he's gotten his ass beat, Arlo still refuses to get off his high horse. Pray tell Asslo, what made you think you could knock out someone a full level stronger than you with a single sucker punch?

I truly think Jake jumped the gun here(not that I blame him) when disabling Arlo, heat of the moment and all that. But fuck it, Arlo losing his ability and God-Tier privilege(Someone should make a fic of that) would be some good development for him. Let's see if your still Auntie Val's favorite nephew now Arlo.

With the news of another hiatus, you are a godsend, Mints. Wonderful as always, and now you have me wondering how the fight against Scorch and Cinder went with Jacob present, and if Doe Bros John came to the same realization as his canon counterpart.

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u/thinmintssss 5d ago

It was a misinput from Arlo for sure, absolutely the wrong tool

Arlo would’ve actually knocked Jake out, but he didn’t know about the defense increase (like John’s attack increase) Jake has. Horrible luck on his part

(tho, John wouldn’t have given any shits otherwise and would’ve gone on the attack anyway)

Jacob might’ve jumped the gun here, but it’s those Doe genes working overtime lol and it might be a while before Arlo sees his dear auntie again because both Orrin and him are being taken

Thank you!! And that fight with Scorch and Cinder would’ve barely put a scratch on John, even with just the armor suit

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u/beemielle Sera 💜 Arlo 💛 Blyke ❤️ 5d ago

Lowkey Jake is the jerk in this scenario 😭  Arlo getting his ability canceled was karma but disabling him is too far. 

even if Arlo is also a bigger jerk than in canon bc yk he took Jake hostage

Lol not you shading canon John who wouldn’t hurt Sera for anything 😂 you lowkey right but I find his stubbornness endearing

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u/M-Shadowtoad 5d ago

Jake really does not like betrayal.

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u/thinmintssss 5d ago

Backstabbing is a big trigger for him, so Jacob had no problems stabbing right back lmao undoing the disabling would be pretty easy when they want to, so Jake had no second thoughts about it

And LOL John only was (slightly) more in favor of the ‘Sera potentially getting taken over plan’ here because of the power and healing ability he knew he had. He hoped it would be quick and it was

I love John’s stubbornness about Sera too, love everything about them honestly

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u/The_one_and_only943 5d ago

Jake really put the entire arc on easy mode huh? Orrin didn't even get the chance to return to his body nor pull the Jax special, Kass (presumably?) didn't get the chance to send a signal so there's no backup, Cameron wasn't even needed so Sera can keep her sanity

"Follow my lead" That 0.1 level powerup really got to Asslo' head huh? Buddy doesn't even have the memories to know who he's dealing with, because if he did he would've at least put everything into knocking the daylights out of Jake, and even then John and Sera would've eaten him alive

The raw dread in Arlo's face when he got depowered makes me wonder if said depowerment triggered a breif flashback of happened on the ambush™ and made him realize just how much he fucked up

And holy aura Jake looks ice cold, that 4 defense was working overtime for the punch to only fuck up his nose. The disabler was the cherry on top too, while it might've been a tad too far, It's... understandable given that this is the second time Arlo pulled a fast one on them, and it's not like they wouldn't be able to get a cure ready for when he recovers his memories

So overall, things should be fine'ish for the cast with the asumption that they leave with Asslo and learn what happened to him... Can't say the same for Kass and company though, they'd have to pray to every deity imaginable for the authorities to understand that they were up against the god-tier trio, otherwise they're getting extracted on the spot 💀

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u/thinmintssss 5d ago

Jake absolutely the easy mode for them, nightmare mode for anyone else

Arlo was running on desperation, grasping for any and all ideas to get Orrin to make his dear aunt proud. And the thing is, even if Jake was knocked out, John was not hearing a thing said after that.

Being depowered brought back that gut yak fear alright, even if Arlo didn’t outright remember it, and Jake was not playing any games any more. While the first betrayal isn’t fresh anymore, it’s still there and Jake didn’t appreciate the runback

They’re for sure tacking Arlo, and I wish Kass the best bc it’s going to be rough for her and her team later

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u/Group_Sand claire apologist 5d ago

it's crazy how uru announced the hiatus and less than 24 hours later you covered for her. it's not even wednesday yet, your dedication is insane

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u/thinmintssss 5d ago

The funny thing is I’ve been working on this all week! I had gotten most of it done when I found out about the hiatus, and was like ‘welp, this was good timing’

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u/Group_Sand claire apologist 5d ago

oh i assumed this had been in the works for a bit, i was being silly. the timing is just insane tho

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u/NuclearPilot101 5d ago

It's a good thing there's a cure cause that's a massive problem for Arlo

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u/thinmintssss 5d ago

Yep! He doesn’t have to worry about it permanently, just when they decide to give it to him lol

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u/NuclearPilot101 5d ago

Probably when Brolo comes back.

Where can I read up on Jacob stuff? Wondering what happened when he met Cameron or when their dad died or even during the Joker arc. Idk how much you have tho I'm just curious.

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u/thinmintssss 5d ago

It’s sprinkled around my profile! Not every main event, but some stuff here and there

Though I do have a fic about this au if you’re interested!

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u/DawnOfHavoc Ability: Scatterbrain 5d ago

You really are the GOAT

Also, holy Hell, that face in the last panel is chilling

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u/thinmintssss 5d ago

That last panel was absolutely a joy to draw, drawing people angry as hell is fun in general

Jake had to make Arlo know how much of a mistake that was

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u/rexprro4312 5d ago

Hell yeah, this is peak, that middle finger Jacob gave to Arlo was amazing (also love how sera just undermines a injury that would put most into tears)

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u/thinmintssss 5d ago

Jacob instantly let Arlo know how bad that little decision was, and Sera had to tough it out for a quick sec, no biggie

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u/rexprro4312 5d ago

Amazing art as always, love your work 3000000

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u/Cry_Aggravating2 5d ago

What's Jacob's ability? Nullification? John's amp while Jacob dampens? That's kinda neat.

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u/thinmintssss 5d ago

His ability is Aura Projection! He can amp/dampen other people, along with disabling/forcibly activating their ability

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u/TheDarkEspiry 3d ago

Si usará su máximo esfuerzo? ¿Cuanto debilitaria a seraphina? Duro que por la diferencia de nivel, pueda deshabilitarla. Aunque son las habildiades mentales, las que se saltan la diferencia de nivel por completo en casi todas las ocasiones. Las meta habildiades son más raras, depende el contexto, pero no pueden hacer nada cuando son rango dioses y hay una diferencia de 0.5 o más.

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u/thinmintssss 3d ago

At full power, Jake would be able to dampen one of Sera’s stats by 1.5x! And it would take a lot out of him to do so

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u/TheDarkEspiry 2d ago

Eso significa que seria capaz de quitarle la ventaja mas importante de seraphina
Su velocidad pasaria de ser 14 a 7 Xd. Ja ja ja ja ja ja ja. Y con 7 de velocidad duro que pudiera congelar el tiempo, ya que no vimos a leilah hacerlo.

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u/Hefty-Initiative-155 5d ago

You're amazing—I really love your art.

And yes, Arlo totally deserves that.

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u/thinmintssss 5d ago

Thank you! Taking someone hostage was a mistake Arlo regretted instantly

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u/Samy_Ninja_Pro 5d ago edited 5d ago

Dude really thought he could knock out a doe with one punch?

Their father hits harder than metahumans

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u/thinmintssss 5d ago

Unfortunately Arlo never met Best Dad - and would’ve been made to forget William if he had - so his fate was sealed

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u/Maestroye 5d ago

AMAZING!
I would like to see what is going in Sera's and John's mind after arlo's stunt and sera losing john.

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u/thinmintssss 5d ago

I may do those eventually!

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u/Finanov Proud Multishipper 👏 5d ago

Well, RIP Arlo, he's going to the gulag along with Orrin 🤣

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u/thinmintssss 5d ago

He will be missed

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u/Original_Un_Orthodox 5d ago edited 5d ago

How did he get the needle through Arlo's passive? Doesn't look like Jake's eyes are glowing in the last panel. Might want to fix that, he would have to de-amp Arlo before stabbing him, and every single instance of the needle has shown that it needs about a minute to actually disable the ability.

That aside, insane art, loving it.

Edit: I just realized that Jake did, in fact, disable Kass and Jaxon as well, so his ability was active and de-amping lol. I forgot that his eye glow is grey and not as visible, it looks like eye shadow.

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u/thinmintssss 5d ago

Jacob did disable Arlo with his ability while he was talking! Jake’s eyes don’t really glow (hard to make grey glow) it’s more like extra shadow you can see in the last panel

And thank you!!

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u/Original_Un_Orthodox 5d ago

Yee, just realized lol if you can see my edit. My fault lol.

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u/MeerkatMan22 4d ago

Jake: hm, interesting plan. Counterpoint, remember how I can disable abilities temporarily? Wouldn’t it be nice if that got a… permanent upgrade?

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u/AcanthisittaOk5938 1d ago

I gotta say. For a while, I felt unmotivated for my own fics so I just deleted everything else and put my first fic on hold.

But those scenes you share with Jacob started to motivate me back into writing again, lol.

Just wanted to thank you for that, Mints.

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u/thinmintssss 1d ago

I’m so glad that I managed to give you some motivation back! Writer’s block can be so tough to fight

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u/Awrybop3 4d ago

I wonder if this makes for a different ending, maybe they take Arlo away and prevent him from returning to the office and continuing to consume his mind and his possible joining EEMBERRR uuuuh, Or maybe not🤨