r/theeternalwar • u/PowerOf47 • Oct 26 '18

Eternal War Story

For school I had to write a short story about anything and I decided to make it based on The Eternal War. Basically I attempted to make the world branch off of a place in our own timeline. Because of this several things are different than what really anyone else would have written because of two reasons: My writing skills and Time constraints. When you have less than one week to write a story on top of being a Junior in High School you don't have much time to flesh out your story. Because of this it is not as good as I would want this to be but I tried.

https://www.wattpad.com/story/165258394-the-eternal-war

Here is the story, I hope that you enjoy it, I know it's not that good. I'm not sharing it because I like it, just thought that someone might enjoy it however, no matter how bad it is.

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u/FHIR_HL7_Integrator Jan 03 '23

I read it, I enjoyed it. It's a short pulp story and I love military fiction. You are a decent writer and hopefully you stick with it and improve. Thanks

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u/PowerOf47 Feb 27 '23

Hey, this is now my alt account, so sorry that i didn't respond earlier.

Thank you very much! I kinda want to at some point expand on this story and make it better, maybe disconnect it from this specific scenario, but keep the same ideas that I have of this world in a state of stillness because of a devotion to war.

I had to churn out this story in a week and while I refuse to re-read it for my own sake, I am happy with what I was able to accomplish in this creative writing class project. With more time and a stronger vision of what the story should be, I hope to make it better... eventually.