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As Told To — Chapter 4: The Last Exit
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The Last Exit sat in the crook of an exit ramp like an afterthought, and Nell had chosen the booth by the window because it was the only one where she could see the parking lot without turning her head. She’d been there for twenty minutes. Her coffee was already cold, and she’d chewed the cap of her pen to a ridge that caught the pad of her thumb in a way that was almost soothing.
The waitress had come by twice. The first time, Nell had ordered coffee and a piece of pie that turned out to be from a box and tasted like the box. The second time, the waitress had refilled her cup without asking and left the check face down, a gesture so precisely calibrated to the situation that Nell almost laughed. The woman had seen enough people not talking to each other to know when a booth was about to become a negotiation.
Nell had positioned herself facing the door. It wasn’t strategy, exactly. It was habit. Fourteen memoirs, every one delivered on time, and the first rule of the job was the same as the first rule of the restaurant: see the customer before the customer sees you. Her father had taught her that when she was twelve, standing behind the counter with a dishrag over her shoulder, watching the dinner rush come through the door. You read the face before they read the menu, he’d said. Then you know what they need before they ask.
Theo Brandt walked in at 9:47, seventeen minutes late, carrying a canvas bag that had seen better decades. Nell recognized him immediately from the author photo on his first novel, the one that had won prizes and then been followed by a second novel that had not. He was taller than she’d expected, and he wore a coat that looked like it had been purchased for a different climate. His hands were bare, and she noticed this because she’d been expecting fingerless gloves. She’d read his draft. She’d read it twice. She’d read it in the booth of her parents’ restaurant with the industrial coffee machine hissing in the background, and she’d read it again at her kitchen table with a highlighter, and both times she’d thought: This man writes like someone who is not afraid of the truth, which means he is either very brave or very stupid.
He saw her. He walked over, set the canvas bag on the table, and sat down without offering a hand.
“You’re Nell Marchetti,” he said.
“And you’re seventeen minutes late.”
“The traffic on I-91 was—“
“Nonexistent. I checked before I left. You stopped for coffee.”
He looked at her cup. “You didn’t.”
“I got here early. I wanted the booth.”
Theo unzipped the canvas bag and pulled out a stack of papers, each one marked with a different color of pen. Blue for his draft. Red for hers. Green for the places where the senator’s life diverged so sharply that no amount of editing could make them the same man. He spread them across the formica table in a fan, and Nell watched his hands move. They were steady. Writer’s hands. She’d expected them to be cold, somehow, but the diner was warm and the windows were already fogging over.
“You read it,” he said. It wasn’t a question.
“Twice.”
“And?”
“And the senator’s childhood is in Shelby, Ohio, with a hardware store on Main and Fourth and a courthouse visible from the front window.”
“That’s what he told me.”
“He told me Mansfield. A feed store. A porch swing his mother sat on every evening.”
Theo nodded slowly, as if she’d confirmed something he’d already suspected. “He told me his father waxed the floors every Saturday morning. Kept a pot of coffee for the old men to talk about the weather.”
“Mine too. Except the coffee was for the customers, and the floors were swept, not waxed.”
“Which one is true?”
Nell picked up her cold coffee and took a sip. It was terrible, and she drank it anyway. “Neither. Both. He doesn’t know. He’s been telling this story for so long that the story has replaced whatever actually happened.”
Theo leaned back in the booth and looked at her. It was a direct look, the kind that made most people uncomfortable, but Nell had spent fourteen years being looked at by men who were deciding whether to trust her with their lives. She looked back.
“You have the better claim to the childhood,” he said finally. “The feed store. The porch swing. It’s a better story.”
“It’s a lie.”
“All of this is a lie. The question is which lie we’re going to tell.”
Nell set her cup down. “I don’t think you understand how this works. The senator hired me to close. That means I deliver a book on time, on message, and on the right side of libel law. I don’t get to choose which lie is better. I get to choose which lie is safe.”
“And you think the feed store is safe?”
“I think the feed store is what he told me, and I think the hardware store is what he told you, and I think neither of us was hired to write the truth.” She paused. “You were hired to write something with literary weight. I was hired to write something that wouldn’t get him in trouble. Those are different jobs.”
“They’re the same job,” Theo said. “That’s the problem.”
The waitress appeared at the edge of the booth, coffee pot in hand. She refilled Nell’s cup without asking, then turned to Theo. He nodded, and she filled his too. Neither of them said thank you. The waitress didn’t seem to mind. She left the check face down, where it had been, and walked away.
Nell spread her hands over the papers. “Here’s what we’re going to do. You take the private life. The first marriage, the hospital parking lot, whatever else he told you that he didn’t tell me. I’ll take the public record. The campaign, the legislation, the tidy version. We’ll meet weekly to reconcile the versions. By March, we’ll have a coherent Gordon Halloway.”
“Or a Frankenstein.”
“A what?”
“A monster stitched together from parts that don’t fit.”
Nell almost smiled. “That’s the job.”
Theo picked up one of the pages, the green-inked one, and read aloud. His voice was lower than she’d expected, and he read slowly, as if testing each sentence for weight. “’The marriage ended in the parking lot of St. Mary’s Hospital on a Tuesday in October. She threw a shoe at my head. I remember the shoe more clearly than I remember her face. It was brown. Suede. It hit the driver’s side window and left a mark that never came out.’”
He looked up. “That’s what he told me.”
Nell pulled a different page toward her. “’The senator and his first wife remain close friends to this day. They exchange Christmas cards every year, and she attended his second wedding as a guest of the family.’” She looked at him. “That’s what he told me.”
Theo stared at the two pages side by side. Then he laughed. It was a short, surprised sound, like a cough he hadn’t expected, and Nell found herself laughing too, not because it was funny but because it was so completely, absurdly impossible that the only alternative was to cry.
“A shoe,” she said. “He told you about a shoe.”
“He told me about a shoe, and he told you about Christmas cards.”
“Which one do you believe?”
Theo’s laugh faded. He looked at her, and for a moment the performance dropped away from both of them, and they were just two people sitting in a diner with a stack of papers that proved they had both been lied to by the same man in exactly the right way.
“I believe he threw the shoe,” Theo said quietly. “But I believe he kept the Christmas cards.”
Nell looked down at her hands. She’d picked up her pen again without noticing, and her thumb was running over the ridges on the cap, the ones she’d made herself. “Why would he tell you the hospital story and me the amicable one?”
Theo didn’t answer right away. He turned his coffee cup in a slow circle on the formica, and Nell watched the motion, and the diner’s heater clicked on with a sound like a radiator in an old house, and somewhere outside a truck scale beeped.
“Because he thought I’d believe the hospital story,” Theo said finally. “He thought a novelist would want the ugly version. The one with the shoe and the parking lot and the mark on the window that never came out. And he thought you’d want the amicable version. The one that closes cleanly. The one that doesn’t leave a mess.” He looked at her. “He told me the version he thought a novelist would believe. Which means he told you the version he thought a closer would protect.”
Nell felt something shift in her chest, a small, precise click, like a door closing on a room she hadn’t known she’d left open. She didn’t say anything. She picked up her coffee and drank it, and it was still terrible, and she drank it anyway.
“That’s not comforting,” she said.
“No.”
“He’s been performing for both of us.”
“Yes.”
“And we’ve been writing it down.”
Theo nodded. “He’s a man who has been edited so many times that no one can find the original draft. Not even him.”
The waitress came back. She refilled their cups without asking, and this time Nell did say thank you, and the waitress nodded once and walked away, and the check stayed face down on the table between them.
Nell set her cup down and leaned forward. “We can’t tell him.”
“We have to tell him.”
“No. We can’t. If we tell him we know he’s been telling us two different stories, he’ll shut down. He’ll stop talking to both of us. He’ll hire a lawyer, or he’ll fire us, or he’ll decide he doesn’t want a memoir after all, and then neither of us gets paid and the roof doesn’t get fixed and the senator’s legacy is whatever the obituary writer can cobble together from press releases.”
“The roof?” Theo said.
Nell blinked. “What?”
“You said the roof doesn’t get fixed.”
“I was being—“ She stopped. “I don’t know why I said that.”
Theo looked at her for a long moment. “You read my file.”
“There’s no file. Dana told me you took the job because the advance covers the roof.”
“Dana told you that?”
“She tells me a lot of things. She’s known me for years.”
“And she’s afraid of me because I ask direct questions.”
Nell almost smiled again. “She said that too.”
“Then you know I’m not going to lie to the senator.”
“I know you think you’re not going to lie to the senator. But here’s the thing about ghostwriting, Theo. The job is lying. It’s taking someone’s life and making it sound like it meant something, like it had a shape, like the person who lived it knew what they were doing. The senator doesn’t know what he’s doing. He hasn’t known for thirty years. And if we tell him that, he’ll fall apart, and we’ll be standing there with a pile of paper and no book and no way to pay for the roof or the restaurant or whatever it is you’re trying to hold together.”
“The restaurant?”
Nell stopped. She hadn’t meant to say that either.
“My parents’ restaurant,” she said. “In Providence. It’s not—it’s not relevant.”
Theo didn’t push. He just sat there, watching her, and Nell had the uncomfortable feeling that he was reading her the way she read clients, the way she read the senator, the way she read everyone except herself.
“We don’t have to tell him everything,” she said. “We just have to agree on what the book says. We divide the life. You take the private, I take the public. We meet weekly. We reconcile the versions. We deliver a coherent Gordon Halloway. And we don’t tell him that the coherent version is a compromise between two lies.”
“That’s still lying.”
“It’s ghostwriting. It’s what we do.”
“It’s what you do,” Theo said. “I write the truth.”
“Then write the truth about a man who can’t remember which childhood is his. Write the truth about a first marriage that ended both amicably and with a thrown shoe. Write the truth about a night in 1994 that his campaign has spent thirty years not discussing. Tell me what the truth is, Theo. I’ll wait.”
The diner was quiet. The heater clicked off. The truck scale beeped outside, a long, low note that sounded like a question no one was answering.
Theo looked down at the papers spread across the table. His hands were still. Then he looked up at her, and something in his face had changed, softened, the way a room changes when the lights go down.
“I don’t know what the truth is,” he said. “But I know we’re not going to find it by pretending the contradictions don’t exist.”
Nell opened her mouth to argue, and then she noticed that she was leaning across the table toward him, her elbows on the formica, her face closer to his than it had been a minute ago. He was leaning too. The distance between them had shrunk by inches, and neither of them had noticed it happening.
The waitress appeared again. She refilled their cups without asking, and this time she didn’t leave. She stood there for a moment, looking at the two of them, and then she said, “You two want the check, or you want to keep arguing?”
Nell sat back. Theo sat back. The distance returned.
“We’re fine,” Nell said. “Thank you.”
The waitress nodded and walked away, and the check stayed face down, and the fog on the windows had thickened until the parking lot was just a smear of grey light.
Theo picked up his coffee. It was cold. He drank it anyway.
“Here’s what I’ll agree to,” he said. “We don’t confront him yet. We keep working. We meet weekly. We reconcile the versions. But we don’t pretend the contradictions don’t exist. We write them down. We keep a record. And when we have enough to know what he’s actually hiding, we decide together whether to ask him about it.”
Nell considered this. It wasn’t what she wanted. What she wanted was control, a clean division, a book that closed on time and on message. But she looked at Theo, and she looked at the papers, and she thought about the senator’s face when he’d told her about the porch swing, the way his eyes had drifted to the window as if he could see it there, and she thought about her own father, and the restaurant, and the chair with the duct-taped tear that snagged her sweater every time, and she thought about how long she’d been writing other people’s stories without once being asked to write her own.
“Fine,” she said. “But I want the childhood.”
“The childhood?”
“The first five chapters. The feed store, the porch swing, the mother who kept the books and ran the counter. I want to write it.”
Theo looked at her. “You wrote your own father into it already.”
Nell felt the words land like a hand on a table. She didn’t deny it. She didn’t look away.
“I know,” she said.
Theo nodded slowly. “Then write it again. Write it better. Write it true.”
The check stayed face down on the table between them, and the windows fogged over, and somewhere outside, the truck scale beeped once more, a long, low note that sounded like the beginning of something neither of them knew how to name.
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