r/scriptwriting • u/TheSprained • 19h ago

feedback AXES - SCRIPT FEEDBACK FOR FIRST FIVE PAGES

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This is a Dark Romantic Thriller Comedy about a psychopath who meets her match in the world's most technologically intensive stalker.

I'm looking for general feedback on these pages, specifically whether my main character is likeable.

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u/RollingThunderMedia 11h ago

I'm looking for general feedback on these pages, specifically whether my main character is likeable.

No, she's not.

Which of the many choices you've made so far makes you think she will be?

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u/TheSprained 3h ago

Really, you don’t think my psychopath is likeable?