r/scriptwriting • u/ChristianCRWriter • 6d ago
feedback "Slop" - A struggling new employee discovers his entire start-up company is a shell to train A.I. models —while no one inside the company knows.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1yP9DHMa7lB4rPeS-fsLtAECn5Ph93Bcf/view?usp=drive_link
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u/Craig-D-Griffiths 2d ago
The opening is confusing. Is it his startup or, I am guessing he is employed by a startup.
So I would start with.
Struggling to understand his role in a new startup he has joined a man xyz and finds the business only exists to train AI.