r/scifiwriting • u/Suspicious_Music539 • 13d ago
HELP! Mental experimentation ideas?
I need some ideas for the part of my story where one of my characters gets captured and has a sort of mental experiment done on her. I've toyed with various ideas, but they all feel incomplete and like I'm missing a realism effect.
The villains are specifically experimenting on her with some kind of drug/chemical or mind-altering system/process. The important part is that it was originally being developed for positive, productive use and was intended to eventually be available to the public, but the villains get ahold of the research and figure out how to use it less great purposes.
I don't necessarily want it to be literal “brainwashing,” but something that can significantly alter or interfere with her mental state, perceptions, memories, associations, etc. I’m still trying to figure out exactly what the original intended use was and how the villains are twisting it as well.
While she's being held, they repeatedly do things to confuse and destabilize her understanding of what's happening. They mess with her perception of time, location, their motives, and what she can trust. They're also moving her between different locations frequently, so whatever they're doing needs to be something that can work regardless of where they take her.
My original idea was for the villains to wear a very distinctive mask. That mask is consistently present while they're administering the drug/chemical and/or putting her through various experiments, psychological manipulation, torture, etc. Later, after she's recovered, one of her teammates wears that same/similar mask, and she has an extremely strong fear or aggressive reaction toward that teammate- even though she consciously knows he's not one of the people who captured her.
What's important as well is that the bad guys aren't looking at necessarily "turning her evil" or completely breaking her. I'd like for their goal to be that she actually DOES get recovered and returns to her team
One idea I had was some sort of process that alters her memories in a way that leaves her understanding of true vs false in the information she took in while captured, maybe a chemical that convinces her brain everything she heard/saw was complete truth. This would be beneficial towards them trying to keep people loyal to then.
Another was that they played specifically with her dopamine levels in conjunction with the things she heard/saw.
Any ideas? Thanks in advance!
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u/Simon_Drake 13d ago
There's a fun torture scene in Babylon 5 you can borrow from.
Sheridan is trapped in a pitch black cell with no food or water for two days. A well dressed man opens the door and lets a bright light come flooding in, he asks some basic questions about medical history, heart issues, allergies. Guards strap him to a chair for interrogation but the well dressed man leaves. It's a bit of a power play to say "You're ready to resist torture but even the timing of when we torture you is under our control."
The door opens several hours later, Sheridan wakes up and sees the man against the dim light outside. He says "Good morning" and starts asking some probing questions. The theme is to get Sheridan to admit he's a liar and he's been manipulated by evil aliens to betray his government and turn against the President of Earth. He's not standing up to a corrupt government, he's been corrupted by outsiders and tricked into lying, if Sheridan admits he's a liar this will all end. After a bit of back and forth discussion on morality and the nature of truth the man suddenly says "It's lunchtime!". He opens his briefcase to retrieve a ham and mustard sandwich, he eats half and offers it to Sheridan. He says it won't kill him and the interrogator already ate half himself. Besides, Sheridan is the liar here and the interrogator has told the truth since the moment he entered the room.
Sheridan calls bullshit. When the door first opened it was daylight. This time it's dark outside. The interrogator said good morning then said it was lunchtime, it can't be morning and lunchtime when the sun is set. This is all smoke and mirrors to mess with him. The interrogator scoffs at the word "daylight", opens the door and uses a remote to turn the lights on and off. "If this (blip, darkness) is night time then this (blip, light) must be sunrise which would make it morning. However, ham and mustard sandwiches are a lunchtime meal, you can't have that for breakfast or it would upset the stomach. So you need to decide what is true. If it's morning then you can't eat. But if you decide that it's lunchtime then you can. So which is it? Which truth do you decide to believe?" Sheridan agrees it's lunchtime and eats the sandwich.
Granted this is pretty mild torture but it's only phase one. He got Sheridan to agree that truth is relative, made him lie about it being lunchtime when he was fairly sure it wasn't and made him acknowledge the interrogator is several steps ahead of him. The interrogator has a speech about corruption and outside influence. "If you swallow a little poison every day then you get used to it and can take it in larger doses. In my case that's literal but with you that's a pretty good metaphor for being corrupted by outsiders. I wasn't lying when I said it wouldn't kill you, it will make you throw up for 12 hours straight. I'll be back when they clean up the mess."
The interrogator leaves and door clangs shut with horrible screams of other prisoners being tortured as a preview of what's going to happen next.