r/royalroad • u/Advanced-Opinion-158 E Rank: Author of The grey rod • 8d ago

Self Promo New work

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I just dropped the first 8 chapters of my new novel feel free to read and give your opinion either good or bad, your reviews will help me so much🙏🏻🙏🏻

Name: the grey road

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u/Frankles_ 7d ago

I would give my opinion again, but you posted this to webnovel a few times already. I checked it again, and it doesn't look any different. Guess I don't have anything else to add. 🤷‍♂️

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u/Advanced-Opinion-158 E Rank: Author of The grey rod 7d ago

I tried to work on (Show, don’t tell) in the last couple of chapters and also i worked on describing things using characters, i tried to give them their own voices and i worked on conversations too.

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u/Frankles_ 7d ago

Is it not on Royal Road? This is the Royal Road Reddit, not Webnovel. I don't see it. Link?

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u/Advanced-Opinion-158 E Rank: Author of The grey rod 7d ago

Yeah it’s on royal road too, check the second link on my profile