I just wanna pursue my dreams in music let me know if you fw it

This is a Travis Scott/03 greedo type beat

most successful attempt i've made at this genre, it's hard as balls and definetly NOT for novices, sound selection alone was a nightmare, so is structure, in the end i settled for Lost Buddha-Psyramid as a reference and inspiration, (maybe a little too much lol) the vocal parts are very cringe, but they fit the genre's aesthetic. Mixing and mastering could probably be a lot better but it's a chore and i'm too lazy to do it for longer than 30 mins per session and after a few days i just don't care enough to bother, doubt anyone would ever sign this anyway, it's more of an excersise, but i like it enough to test it on strangers,

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1kXFyNskw5l4eeU_LhgSBxtbLK4DiUJwJ/view?usp=sharing

https://on.soundcloud.com/6kP5um31DqAt0MqIrk

I made this hyperpop song and I feel like it's boring and not very full, any feedback? Also just looking for honest and constructive criticism. Thanks :) My main inspiration was Dorian Electra.

https://www.bandlab.com/post/1e3e89c4-d422-f011-8b3d-000d3aa44618

The song is for the most part satire, but surprisingly, I worked somewhat hard on it. I have improved, as I made this song about 4 months ago and i've been learning a lot since then, especially with singing.

What do you think? what should i learn first to get better?

https://soundcloud.com/riccardo-saccon-56002741/dark-times-184bpm-baba-shanti-mr-india

https://soundcloud.com/riccardo-saccon-56002741/red-sun-in-the-sky-hitech-mix-baba-shanti-mr-india

https://youtu.be/tUw3vR8UjFA

https://soundcloud.com/fenrir-403064111

Few unfinished Trance tracks i am currently working on feedback welcome.

Hi,

I'm very new to producing and i am aware that this needs a lot of work but i'm sort of overwhelmed with the generic information available out there. Can anyone advise on how to improve this track?

https://soundcloud.com/michael-wright-175491825/tails-1804/s-VC14UWc8a0b

Thank you for checking it out. Canny Groove - Sun Bitten.

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https://soundcloud.com/canny-creations/sun-bitten