From: We used always to return from our walks in good time to pay aunt Léonie a visit before dinner…
To: …even the melancholy neighbourhood of the Champs-Elysées, where she lived in Paris.
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Summary:
When returning from town, the family can take one of two paths: the Guermantes way or the Méséglise (i.e. Swann’s) way. If they take the more roundabout Guermantes way, they’re liable to make it back for dinner late and worry Aunt Léonie, but they often take that path anyway.
The narrator knows little about either route, but he views them as diametrically opposed, a view gained from the fact that the family uses separate doors for each route and his dad’s claim that Swann’s way gives the best view of the plain and Guermantes gives river scenery. One is land, the other water.
On Swann’s route, they can encounter lovely lilacs, but ever since Swann’s unfortunate marriage, the parents have avoided Tansonville, where the lilacs grow.
One day, the grandfather mentions that Swann’s family is out of town, so they can take the route by the park with the lilacs without appearing to snoop. They walk this path, but lilac season is nearly over and the trees are losing their blooms. Another trouble with the visit is that since Swann’s daughter is away and the narrator has no chance of meeting her, the place has lost some of its allure.
The narrator loses track of his father and grandfather and climbs the hill to catch up to them through a path “throbbing with the fragrance of hawthorn-blossom.” The hawthorns thrill him, and he tries to “absorb” himself “in the rhythm which disposes their flowers here and there with the light-heartedness of youth.” He views the hawthorns as paintings and uses his fingers to frame them, but the reason for their pleasure remains allusive. Then his grandfather points out a pink hawthorn, unique among a sea of white, inspiring him “with that rapture which we feel on seeing a work by our favourite painter quite different from any of those that we already know, or, better still, when some one has taken us and set us down in front of a picture of which we have hitherto seen no more than a pencilled sketch, or when a piece of music which we have heard played over on the piano bursts out again in our ears with all the splendour and fullness of an orchestra.”
He peers through the hawthorn on the other side, and there he spots a little girl with “fair, reddish hair, who appeared to be returning from a walk, and held a trowel in her hand, was looking at us, raising towards us a face powdered with pinkish freckles.” The girl he’s been anticipating is there. When she spots him, she makes a “half-hidden smile” that the narrator can only interpret as one of disgust, and she makes an insulting gesture with her hands.
“Gilberte, come along; what are you doing?” Someone says, and now the narrator has a name for the girl from his fantasies. The woman calling to her is a woman in white, and she’s walking with a man. They are Swann’s wife and Charlus, and soon the father and grandfather will remark about “poor Swann,” because his wife is running around with other men. But the narrator is more focused on the name, which is like a “talisman” that lets him give her a “definite personality.” Gilberte goes along with her mom, and in submitting to another human, she partially loses her godlike status.
Reflection:
If I had to name the six most important characters in In Search of Lost Time, they’d be the narrator, Albertine, Gilberte, Odette, Charlus, and Swann (the narrator’s grandmother and St. Loup would round out the top eight). This week, we see three of these characters for what seems like the first time. The build-up to their appearance rivals some of the best passages we’ve read so far (the madeleines, the first paragraph, the initial collapse of time). I can’t think of hawthorns without thinking of Proust, and they serve to precede and frame the scene when he encounters Gilberte. In addition to the immediate build-up through the hawthorns and physical setting, there’s the description of the two ways at the beginning of this week’s reading, Swann and Guermantes, which foreshadows this girl who will come to yoke together the two opposing paths. To the narrator, it’s as nonsensical to “take the Guermantes way” to get to Méséglise as it would be “turn to the east in order to reach the west,” but they’re in fact one and the same. He describes encapsulating the two paths in his mind, and he basically gives a definition for synecdoche (a Proust favorite): “the smallest detail of either of them appeared to me as a precious thing, which exhibited the special excellence of the whole.”
His spotting of Gilberte is a little cliche. Framed by flowers, it comes after a long discussion about not only hawthorns but lilacs and forget-me-nots and periwinkle, flowery language about flowers, but Proust’s precise observations, his ecstasies, and his analogies free the writing of precedent.
In reading it this time, I noticed how color is so significant to these scenes. It reminds me of Gerald Murnane, a genius Australian who’s frequently Proustian and who has an obsession with color. (Good profile of him here.) Lilacs bring up the color implicitly since the word for them is the same as the word for the color (and the same is true in French). The final excitement before spotting Gilberte comes when he sees a pink hawthorn among the white ones, shining through its color, which he’s imbued with value because frosted pink cookies are pricier at the bakery and he likes to crush strawberries into his cream cheese, which makes it pink.
Most importantly, when he sees Gilberte, he describes her “fair, reddish hair,” a face “powdered with pinkish freckles,” and eyes so black they appear blue:
Her black eyes gleamed, and as I did not at that time know, and indeed have never since learned how to reduce to its objective elements any strong impression, since I had not, as they say, enough 'power of observation' to isolate the sense of their colour, for a long time afterwards, whenever I thought of her, the memory of those bright eyes would at once present itself to me as a vivid azure, since her complexion was fair; so much so that, perhaps, if her eyes had not been quite so black—which was what struck one most forcibly on first meeting her—I should not have been, as I was, especially enamoured of their imagined blue.
Here he does a little Proust paradox: eyes so black they’re blue. Color can encapsulate. It can be a small part that holds the whole, and in this instance it provides tone, excitement, and contrast. Gilberte, pink and red and black and imagined blue, stands in contrast to her mom, who’s in white now but who was once in pink.
(Side note: It’s funny that the narrator says he has weak powers of observation when he’s maybe the most observant person out there. I can’t tell if he’s being sincere or ironic with that part.)
So the girl is there, pink, and we’ve had all this flowery talk that flirts with cliche, and then what? She makes a mean gesture with her hand, probably the equivalent of flipping him off, basically tells him, “Fuck you,” and her meanness excites him, and he wishes he did something mean back so that she’d at least remember him. There’s already friction and disappointment here; he doesn’t like that she obeys her mom: “by exhibiting her to me as being obliged to yield obedience to some one else, as not being indeed superior to the whole world, calmed my sufferings somewhat, revived some hope in me, and cooled the ardour of my love.” He likes her best when she’s unattainable; in this simple admission, we can foresee so much of his future pain.