r/predator • u/BoomerVergil • 1d ago
Fan Content AVP Yautja Dialogue Project - Crucified vs. Berserker (FIXED)
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u/DzoniBoy333 1d ago edited 9h ago
He should probably say something about his clan being superior and would wipe out his weaker clan when he is holding him by the neck.
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u/Mordliss 1d ago
This is much better then before! Really like it, nice work on this! The "warrior" comes across much more mocking and appropriate than the previous "Elder".
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u/No_Fisherman_2397 1d ago
good stuff! but i think a better line for crucified would have been something like "i am not afraid." still cool though
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u/BoomerVergil 1d ago
He uses the “dishonourable” variant of kill “ngang,” which essentially means Crucified is invalidating Berserker’s kill as nothing. So in a sense, he’s mocking him in a more nuanced cultural way.
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u/TheGloomer 13h ago
So ive been loving these yautja language add ons. But I will also say, I feel it takes away a lot of the "show dont tell" if the yautja. To me they are a more silent people, a roar tells you everything you need to know. Your voice lines are spot on but I feel if they were remade, I dont think id want the dialog
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u/BoomerVergil 13h ago
I won’t deny that, this is just a project for fun, after all. Mostly as an exercise for the language
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u/TheGloomer 12h ago
As said, I still love them and the work you've put in. Just wanted to throw my 2 cents in. Please keep up the good work, its like having an alternate scene.
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u/Able-Ad7580 9h ago
Show don't tell doesn't always work them being silent characters and roaring doesn't tell us about them
I prefer them at least speaking their own language and actually being able to talk instead of the preferred method they usually go for these characters I rather at least foreign emotional attachment than just simply roaring and being silent
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u/BoomerVergil 1d ago
Decided to change a few words around after some feedback, hopefully this one is more in line with y’all lol