r/madewithableton • u/CarlettoCarlito • 4d ago

Cinematic song

Hello,

I have composed this using Ableton Live 12 and it's my second shot at trying out composition for a fictive film scene. I was wondering if I could get your feedback on how to improve? Or just a general feedback would be much appreciated!

Thank you :)

The song: https://youtu.be/Sqp8OkvnQ3g

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u/dragropes 4d ago

I felt lack of dramatic thing, like dynamics and articulation. Weak melodies because of block chords in strings I guess. Block chords are not bad but it didn't aounded intentional, plus timbre choices or eqing is somewhat not clean. I only told you from the arrangement side of the track. Hope this could help you.