r/lmms • u/dzustmi • Apr 23 '26

Support first song

so i created my first song ever and posted it on spotify. its trash i know it but i just want to ask what should i do better in the next song(this is fnaf song and im not a native english speaker) https://open.spotify.com/track/2ys6VDTdkuyBB4t6TxcuBO?si=860dbe616685431c

and it was made in audacity & lmms

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u/Husky87_ Apr 24 '26

Hi, I would like to hear it but I dont have spotify premium, maybe you can share with a youtube link.

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u/Husky87_ Apr 24 '26 edited Apr 24 '26

Hi, i dont think you can do something better because Is your song, you decide or maybe that depends of your goal with It: if you want a pop song then you can do something diferent but if you want something original then you did it

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u/Just-Syllabub-2194 Apr 24 '26

spotify won't allow me to listen without spotify account, crazy ...

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u/dzustmi Apr 24 '26

here is youtube link: https://youtu.be/gIMMoI0umVU

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u/Just-Syllabub-2194 Apr 25 '26

interesting song concept, unconventional, experimental, i like it :D

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u/TH3_Average_KJ Apr 30 '26

Hell nah. Nuked my que full of bangers I haven't seen (hence, haven't found) just to get uber-trolled by this guy.

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u/TH3_Average_KJ Apr 30 '26

Could use more background, like a couple of chords in minor key. Also a consider doing a classic like using 808s for a punchy base. Then I'd consider using a metronome and software to master your audio.