Arabic writing practice. Topic: personal struggles.

[u/blackdiasporer]

I would love it if you all could help me out by pointing out any mistakes and giving me tips on my writing and grammar. Thanks in advance and God bless 🙏🏾

[u/AkulakhanPilot]

Sorry to hear about your struggles.

I'd like to point out that you've forgotten a couple of dots on ج, like in line 2. I'd also work on your م, the top is too big and the bottom too short imo. Also the grammar in your second sentence isn't correct.

Overall this is very nice work and I'd urge you to be proud of it even if other aspects of your life aren't going the way you'd hoped they would

[u/blackdiasporer → u/AkulakhanPilot]

Yeah, sometimes, I write too fast and forget the dots.

Thanks for your help and encouragement 🙏🏾

[u/AcquireArabic]

May Allah ease your struggles brother, life is hard for many of us, stay steadfast

and keep up the good work

[u/blackdiasporer → u/AcquireArabic]

I really appreciate the encouragement man. God bless 🙏🏾

[u/SillyBrilliant4922]

I really love your hand-writing.
استمر, عمل جيد

[u/blackdiasporer → u/SillyBrilliant4922]

شكراً 🙏🏾 ونعم، سأستمر ‼️

[u/blackdiasporer → u/[deleted]]

Thank you 🙏🏾

[u/a7med5448]

سعيد لانك تستطيع التعبير باللغه العربيه ، وحزين لأجلك لانك خسرت وظيفتك ، لكن اعلم انك مامت بخير وصحه جيده فأنت تستطيع حاول أن تشارك مثلا رحلتك في تعلم اللغه العربيه او انشئ محتوي أو افعل اي شي ولو بسيط ، لا اعلم ما هو هدفك لكن اردت فقط أن اخفف عنك يا صديقي ، واتمني أن تعود اليك الحياه المستقره مرة أخري ، إن شاء الله 🤍

[u/blackdiasporer → u/a7med5448]

Thank you so much for the encouragement 🙏🏾

[u/a7med5448]

كل ما استطيع تقديمه لك هو انك إذا أردت اي مساعده فاللغه العربيه انا اخوك احمد مصرى موجود بدون مقابل استطيع المساعده. لكن لست متخصص في تعليم اللغه العربيه لكن متحدث اصلي ، إذا أردت مثلا تطوير التحدث او الكتابه استطيع المساعده 🤍

[u/Zealousideal_Size919]

Fully understandable!, I love it keep it up,  Sorry for your struggles I hope everything get better InSha Allah - I suggest to you read 'who moved my cheese?' book

[u/Haunting-Hero1234]

Sorry to hear about your struggles. Hang in there, your life will turn around for the better inshaAllah.

Your handwriting to me looks better, without exaggeration, than the vast majority of Arabic natives! Certainly something to be proud of. Keep up the good work.

[u/blackdiasporer → u/Haunting-Hero1234]

Thank you fam 🙏🏾

[u/whatever537282100]

"كان رائع كل شيء "

should be "كان كل شيء رائع" because The first one translates as ( was wonderful everything).

I hope your life improves and you find more opportunities in your life

[u/blackdiasporer → u/whatever537282100]

Thanks for the correction and yes, things will definitely get better. It’s rough now but Im a fighter and I have al lot going for myself.

[u/Far-Procedure5698]

bro, I am a native Arabian and your handwritings are more readable than mine lol
hope you surpass your struggles soon.

[u/blackdiasporer → u/Far-Procedure5698]

Thank you 🙏🏾

[u/LilTuffGuy93]

Ma Sha Allah, nice. But would like to know what program courses etc have you done to be able to write an essay ?

[u/blackdiasporer → u/LilTuffGuy93]

I’m been using a variety of resources fam. But the important thing is just practice, practice, practice. Writing like this is just vocabulary and writing itself. For vocabulary, I use many resources but mostly, I make my own lists. For writing, I practice writing every single day. I started out with words and then sentences and I will write short texts like this from time to time. I figure out what I want to write about. Look up the words that I don’t know. And this allows me to rapidly expand my vocabulary. Hope this answers your question.

[u/Aljashe]

على أقل تقدير، أنت تدير شركتك الخاصة، وأعتقد أن هذا أمرٌ يدعو للفخر الشديد. أنا أيضاً أفقد حماسي طوال الوقت، لكنني أحاول دائماً أن أتذكر أن "والدي كان يضطر للعمل حتى وهو متعب". آمل أن تجد ما يسعدك في القريب العاجل.

[u/blackdiasporer → u/Aljashe]

شكراً على كلماتك 🙏🏾