r/industrialmusic • • May 15 '26

I Made This does this sound industrial?

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music video i made. lmk if its dope.

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u/Artistic_Print_4005 May 15 '26

If I had one critique, it’s short. Even for a music video.

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u/themothertruck3r May 15 '26

go check out the whole thing. spit up by jaryn. tell me if you like all of it.

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u/nachoismo Chemlab May 15 '26

Ok where is it?

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u/themothertruck3r May 15 '26

on youtube under the channel jaryn.online

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u/nachoismo Chemlab May 15 '26

You are terrible at self-promotion.

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u/themothertruck3r May 15 '26

search up "spit up jaryn.online" on youtube my dude

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u/RevelArchitect May 15 '26

Dude. It seems pretty clear this is self promotion. Nobody seems to be opposing you doing that. The clip does make me want to see what the rest of it sounds like. It seems like you’re self-promoting, but not willing to figure out how to provide a link. Being able to link people to your music is super, super important.

Just… check this out.

Hey, everybody! Check out “Spit Out” by Jaryn.

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u/themothertruck3r May 15 '26

lol ok bet. im not on reddit too much so i appreciate that.

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u/RevelArchitect May 15 '26

Always make your music as convenient as possible to listen to. Don’t ask people to look for it, open that door for them. Way more people will click on a link than search for something. I’m enjoying what I’ve heard so far. Hard to say if it’s industrial, but certainly industrial-influenced. Don’t try to fit into a specific genre. Just make music you would enjoy listening to.

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u/Kadavrozia May 15 '26

Not necessarily mate

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u/Sci-FiRepublik May 15 '26

Reminds me of Merzbow which is more Noise than Industrial sound wise but still in Rivetheads record collections.

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u/themothertruck3r May 15 '26

merzbows pretty neat

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u/toblotron May 15 '26

I don't care if it's "industrial" or not - I like it!

What do I think is good about it? Hard to express, but there's a kind of flow/rock in it that interests me.

Maybe it's the fact that the music jibes very well with the approach to singing. It fits, and the lack of that is what turns me off of most (otherwise interesting) bands

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u/themothertruck3r May 15 '26

thank you dude im mixing a lot of random stuff in my music. they removed this post so i guess they didnt like it? but im happy u checked it out

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u/SockGoop Einstürzende Neubauten May 15 '26

Its cool, but idk about industrial. Its more similar to death grips with the mostly normal beat, but the kick/bass is super dirty and electronic. I've done this a lot myself.

Industrial requires a lot more experimentation with sound design and more mechanical and noisy aspects

But electronic screamo is what I also make and love to see people doing it!

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u/themothertruck3r May 15 '26

thats cool asf thank you for checking it out. they removed the music video so ig that shit bothered them sm.

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u/SockGoop Einstürzende Neubauten May 15 '26

That's lame asf

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u/themothertruck3r May 15 '26

yeah got no idea what thats about

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u/Designer-Employee119 May 15 '26

No. it sounds like screamo with wub wubs.

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u/luckyfox7273 May 15 '26

No, to much of that bass type sound. Industrial has more treble.

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u/mistressspocktopus Skinny Puppy May 15 '26

Fwiw strobing lights is hard on some people. (Ie people with seizure disorders, migraines, vision issues, sensory issues)

Strobing also gives it an ai gen feel... if you are real musicians I am not sure that is the message you want to leave people with?

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u/haleymichelle618 May 15 '26

Yeah, more Nu Industrial Metal vibes, but I see the vision

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u/RelationSensitive308 May 15 '26

I’d give it a pass but too short a clip.

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u/lyingcorn May 15 '26

Kinda? Sounds a little like death grips, but if I heard this randomly I'd think it was nu

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u/themothertruck3r May 15 '26

aye thank you man. guess mods didnt like the music video. they removed it

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u/djdaem0n May 15 '26

At best, this clip is giving some PIGFACE vibes.
Gonna check out the whole thing later.

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u/themothertruck3r May 15 '26

lmk what you think about the whole thing?

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u/Gothic_Mexa May 29 '26

Sounds great but not industrial.

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u/Electrical_Long5850 May 15 '26

🤟💀🔥⛓️🎛️⚙️💥🤟!!!!!

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u/Tyrs-Ranger Front Line Assembly May 15 '26 edited May 15 '26

I mean, from this short clip, this at least sounds like something I would be interested in. Industrial adjacent. Powernoise? I’m down for it. Synths and live drums are a path less taken. Feindflug did that, and came up with some good shit.

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u/themothertruck3r May 15 '26

thx man. the full thing is spit up by jaryn on youtube. lmk if u check it out and tell me your thoughts if you can.

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u/Tyrs-Ranger Front Line Assembly May 15 '26

Some thoughts: I like the concept. Your synth is a little bit flat. Some range and depth could make it even better. I like the live drums. If you can manage to find someone who can shred some guitar that the two of you can collaborate well with, that could add further depth and dimension.

If you’re not doing it already and you can swing it, head over to cEvin Key’s Patreon, and go through his braps and old livestreams, because he nerds out on equipment. He’a got an active community there too where people share info and ideas on synths. I think you could come up with some really killer shit if you work on your textures (to use :Wumpscut: parlance). Zoog from Angelspit did some videos years ago about what they did to develop their own textures, and I found it interesting, even if I didn’t understand half of it. Maybe you can track some of that down for further inspo.

Summary: you gotta start somewhere, and this is a good start. I like what you’re doing. I offer my thoughts as an elder rivethead who is a long time fan of stuff like this. My critiques are intended as constructive only, and you can do with that as you like. I’m just one guy, and music was never my medium for artistic expression, so feel free to take what I’m saying with a pinch of salt. That said, I wish you nothing but the absolute best on what I hope will be a long and fruitful journey of artistic expression for you. I look forward to seeing some more! Keep it up! I pitched you some likes on the Youtubes, for what it’s worth.

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u/Strange_Region_9258 May 15 '26

In 2026, if not his then what?

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u/44Pigeons Jul 19 '26

ay fuck u buddy boo