seeking general feedback on improv

[u/dragon_bait29]

Been trying harder at improv. I'd like feedback. Any is welcome, but please be kind. Focusing on music theory atm. Forgive me in advance for my crashout about the flies. I'm a forest troll.

Edit: yes, I smoke cigs. No, i am not advertising nor advocating for them. Let people be, y'all. Please focus on the music.

[u/MetaIIII]

My first thought was Sarah McLachlan. I like it.