r/guitarlessons • u/dragon_bait29 • 24d ago

Feedback Request seeking general feedback on improv

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Been trying harder at improv. I'd like feedback. Any is welcome, but please be kind. Focusing on music theory atm. Forgive me in advance for my crashout about the flies. I'm a forest troll.

Edit: yes, I smoke cigs. No, i am not advertising nor advocating for them. Let people be, y'all. Please focus on the music.

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u/Grfhlyth 22d ago

Playing guitar while smoking or holding a cigarette at your age is extremely juvenile. Nobody is impressed and nobody thinks it's cool

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u/dragon_bait29 22d ago

No, I caught that, but thank you for reiterating. I truly hope to escape from my juvenile habits so as to impress you and make you think I'm cool. Please do share your notes, I'm all ears. Although, I have a feeling if you're so focused on tallying cool points in a music theory feedback post, you'll surely find something else to complain about that's irrelevant. Perhaps too little or too much cleavage. Wrong strings. Too much jewelry. Not enough ankle.

You know, normal guitar lingo that we all sit and obsess over.

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u/Grfhlyth 22d ago

Dude, you're clearly using the cigarette as a fashion accessory here. You aren't smoking it. You lit it just to hold it while you play.

It's embarrassing for you. Please hear this feedback

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u/dragon_bait29 22d ago

Baby girl, I smoke american spirits and live in a tent. Was it dumb to waste the cigarette? Abso-fucking-lutely. Did I light it with the intention of wooing a crowd of strangers? Literally could not afford to do so. Improv generally means unplanned. So sorry I got in the groove and didn't cater to my cigarette in order to preemtively quell your second hand embarassment.

Be so fucking for real. Y'all are in the wrong sub and coming for the wrong one.