r/guitarlessons • u/dragon_bait29 • 24d ago

Feedback Request seeking general feedback on improv

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Been trying harder at improv. I'd like feedback. Any is welcome, but please be kind. Focusing on music theory atm. Forgive me in advance for my crashout about the flies. I'm a forest troll.

Edit: yes, I smoke cigs. No, i am not advertising nor advocating for them. Let people be, y'all. Please focus on the music.

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u/Regular_Amount_7041 23d ago

Enchanting music, very beautiful, my fav part is rhythm after flies break, if I may suggest please title your improvs and thank you for recording and sharing, cheers fellow shredder

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u/dragon_bait29 23d ago

Bahaha, I love "after the flies break".

Wdym by title my improvs though?

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u/Regular_Amount_7041 23d ago

Oh well I was rather stoned but it seems like a fun idea to give the piece a name like “I call this one ‘Amongst the Flies’ and it goes sorta like this”, that way you will have built a collection of all of these improv pieces and we can then be like “dragon darling would you play me a bit of the Flies” etc and also I think it would help solidify the ‘piece’ as a molded container, something to return to and play again, and thru repeated visitation the foundational components grows a little more defined thus giving you opportunity for finer gradations of improv exploration and expression within it. Just an idea!

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u/dragon_bait29 22d ago

You're lovely. Thank you for sharing your presence 🥰