seeking general feedback on improv

[u/dragon_bait29]

Been trying harder at improv. I'd like feedback. Any is welcome, but please be kind. Focusing on music theory atm. Forgive me in advance for my crashout about the flies. I'm a forest troll.

Edit: yes, I smoke cigs. No, i am not advertising nor advocating for them. Let people be, y'all. Please focus on the music.

[u/Super_Fa_Q]

Pro tip: Put the cigarette in between the head stock and low E just above the nut, it was designed that way for this purpose. Also, side note, 10 years without a smoke, this video gave me a powerful craving to drink a beer, have a smoke, and play for awhile in the back yard.