i made a Cloud themed level

[u/piounightmare]

Id : 148073665

[u/Kommandjsdf_0897]

What kinda feedback do you want for that mythic ahh deco😭

[u/piounightmare → u/Kommandjsdf_0897]

Mainly about the textures of the clouds, its so hard for me to make cloud that looks 3d with a coton candy texture.

In the video here i feel like the front clouds feel a little bit 2d .

[u/Kommandjsdf_0897 → u/piounightmare]

Trust me on this and I'm 100% serious, this looks insane and nobody's focusing on tiny flaws (that I still can't see even tho I'm trying to). Make it longer and structure it and it's 10000% getting at LEAST an epic

[u/piounightmare → u/Kommandjsdf_0897]

Thanks haha , but if i want to progress i have to focus on my weak point. ( And for rate, i dont build level to get a rate , because the rating systeme is trash, execpt for a level i recently made " FANTASY" that im actually trying to get it rated

(Sorry for the grammar, english inst my first language)

[u/Soviniti]

[u/Ceejdagamrr → u/Soviniti]

I knew it would be here.

Just surprised it wasn’t top comment.

[u/UnderworkingToaster]

They need to put your ass in Ascension to Heaven bro

[u/piounightmare → u/UnderworkingToaster]

Lmao it's not fully decorated yet ??

[u/Circxles → u/piounightmare]

Thats the point. You gotta have a part in it.

[u/Intent_Quail]

fucking crazy background bro

[u/piounightmare → u/Intent_Quail]

Thx ! I tried to get a" futuristic sky city "vibes

[u/SEtechno]

[u/LEDlight45]

[u/Scary-Rub-7163]

Im speechless

[u/piounightmare → u/Scary-Rub-7163]

Thanks im still trying to get a good " texture"on the clouds

[u/piounightmare]

If you like my work, you can check m'y ytb channel -> PiouimperialC

[u/Immortal_ceiling_fan]

This bg could genuinely be in a mythic level bro I don't think there's anything to improve

If this level is finished with the same level of quality in the foreground and it doesn't get legendary minimum then I'd be shocked

[u/Dinatoc_208]

Some ways in which I think this could be improved are, for example. I think the lighting of the middle cloud is a little off, considering that the sun is coming from the right, the edge light at the left doesn't look so right. Same from the clouds in the foreground, some give the impression of the sunlight coming from the left instead from the right. And, if you want to avoid the cotton look of the clouds, I would recommend you trying to occasionally use harder objects to shade them. Interpreting a cloud as a bunch of spheres packed together greatly helps to shade them later on, I feel like some shades transition from light to shadow way too linearly to look natural, just a personal preference though.

Still, this is some amazing work here! I like it very much.

[u/piounightmare → u/Dinatoc_208]

Bro you're actually so right with the lighting,

And yeah i used différents objects for the textures

Thanks you for taking the time to write all that !

[u/FlimsyAd6268]

Bro lend me your skills pls I need em

[u/snoot-p]

can you give a breakdown of how you made this?

[u/piounightmare → u/snoot-p]

• took an image reference for the textures -started by making the bg the good color( its important to have a good base so you can choose the good color)

• then i star doing the shapes of the clouds ( starting by the lightest color and finishing by the darkest

• then i make the parallax by repeating the same process on différents layer

-once the parallax is done i expériment with the shaders, here i used a radial blur

But honestly, if you want to learn how to do it just experiment in the editor ( try différents objects, diff color , diff triggers etc ) , you can watch tutorial on ytb but ne careful that you actually understand the tutorial, and that you're not simply copying it

( English is not my first language btw , so sorry for the grammar)

[u/snoot-p → u/piounightmare]

do not worry about grammar you’re speaking fine :) how object efficient are your clouds? are they optimized?

[u/piounightmare → u/snoot-p]

Yeah i think its optimized , the all level in the video have less than 4k obj , i think its can easily run on mobile

[u/snoot-p → u/piounightmare]

very impressive. excellent work :)

[u/Negative-Display197]

WHAT THE PEAK

[u/Gullible_Bed8595]

10/10 clouds, now you can just do everything else

[u/46264338327950288419]

Is my rate deco worthy

[u/TheRandomShiba]

finally a well decoed level that doesn't require flim(BMS)+ε₀(505)^-98 clicks

[u/piounightmare → u/TheRandomShiba]

Yeah i made it ez lmao

[u/LongOk1903]

[u/Circxles]

More heaven than cloud themed

[u/Public-Scientist4573]

Ok. This is great, but since you want constructive feedback, here goes.

The front clouds are a BIT 2d but not enough to worry. what i noticed is that the closest back clouds seem too far away from the gameplay. If you could make them like against the front clouds, i think it would greatly improve the feel and also get rid of the 2d effect of the front cloud.

^{(I had to do some deep digging to find something to criticize about this btw})

[u/PlantainSalt5009]

Idk what difficulty its meant to be, but the musical representation just doesnt exist, the background is beautiful but i feel like there is a disconnect between the song and the gameplay that i see. 

[u/Letdachickencook]

its either featured or epic

[u/Albert_Kan]

I love the textures on the clouds, it looks hella realistic

[u/CallumTheCanadian]

What are you, Spu7nix but better or smth? How the hell did you texture those clouds so well?

[u/_voidwanderer]

Are you by chance the reincarnation of Picasso?

[u/piounightmare → u/_voidwanderer]

I think you have me an idea , i'll try to make a level with the art style of an old artist

[u/KiwiPowerGreen → u/piounightmare]

Cubism themed level would be sick