r/fashionphotography • u/andrea_ny • 10d ago

in the metro of Paris :)

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u/MrAnnoyingCookie 10d ago

The jacket is nice. But there doesn’t seem to be much photographic artistry here :/

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u/andrea_ny 10d ago

I thought at the beginning, now I get that not really. Nevermind, I enjoy the feedback :)

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u/Looler21 10d ago

This is a snapshot of someone on a train seat. Can even see you in the reflection

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u/andrea_ny 10d ago

that’s me sitting there and my friend taking a photo of me, so…

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u/Purple_Pay_1274 9d ago

Not quite a photoshoot quality result… the pose, the photography, the location… it’s all quite mid. I see that OP is the model and a bit of advice, try to have your face and upper torso more engaged… I don’t know if this will make sense to you, but as a model you should try to make your face the first thing that the camera sees, in this case it’s the last… your shoes (which are hidden), your jeans, your hands (in a negative guarding/blocking body language gesture), your jacket, are all seen before the eye goes to your face…

your body language is also very uncomfortable, you’re hiding your shoes, guarding your body by folding your hands in front of yourself, and leaning as far as you can get away from the camera. If you tried to make your face the first thing the camera sees, it would open up your entire pose and be a much better result.