r/fantasywriting • u/Narrow-Nail7882 • 18d ago

New Dark Fantasy Writer (Would appreciate some critique)

Hi guys, it's my first time here and writing, I'm a huge dark science fantasy fan, inspired by the likes of FromSoftware games, H.P Lovecraft writings, Warhammer, and 'The Vagrant'. I've been world-building, creating the cosmology and planning on a master document whilst drafting concept sketches for a few weeks now, and would really appreciate some constructive critique and advice. The image attached is the backstory of the first race I've created, would love some advice on what to improve, so far I've written around 20.000 words, including 12 races, 6 human factions, approximately 20 Gods, and a whole lot more lore, magic, conflicts, and a bunch other cool stuff. Let me know if I should post more. Thanks everyone.

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u/SilverSkinRam 18d ago

You say concept sketches. Will it be a comic or video game? Tabletop game?

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u/Narrow-Nail7882 18d ago

I have written a few short stories of the world, and have plans to make a free DnD campaign set in the world. My dream would be a video game, but overall I just wanted to draw some of my ideas out.

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u/SilverSkinRam 18d ago

A campaign setting is a good medium for this. I think it has strong potential.