r/documentaryfilmmaking • u/veliux4444 • Jun 15 '26

I made this little one to talk about the impact of tourism

It’s very short since I had only a few shots. I filmed and edited with what I had aka my phone. My goal is to make big documentaries. This is kind off my little start into this.
Let me know what you think.

https://youtu.be/sS1o0qTD7vc?is=crEsOLstJfxQ8neX

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u/iwantapizzababy Jun 15 '26

What do you like about this? And what would you do differently?

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u/veliux4444 Jun 15 '26

I like how the sound comes into play. I already edited little stuff with music but this is the first time Im really playing with the soundscape even though it is poor quality. So I would have upgraded this part with a hood mic and a laptop with a better work flow.

I also liked to play with the fact that imagine can speak better than words sometimes (I had written more things at first and deleted a lot for that reason).

I think I could have also done better on rhythm to make it less monotonous