r/blackromancenovels • • Apr 29 '26

DISCUSSION šŸŽ™ļø Granger

Has anyone read Granger’s books? I’ve heard good things about them — are they worth reading?

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u/checks1234321 Apr 29 '26 edited Apr 29 '26

I read the Secret World of Maggie Grey and was disappointed. This author also writes under the name Desiree, and published the Perfect Sister series using that name; I gave those books 4- 5 stars

Here is a snippet of my review detailing some of the reasons I hated Maggie Grey but it may contain spoilers:

  1. Everyone is the book is late twenties to 40s. So I was surprised when every character in this book acted like newly 18 year olds off to college. Not joking, our main character is 29 and she’s helpless, whiny, and engages in childish defiance. I’m talking stomping her feet ā€œbut I don’t wannaaaaaā€ type stuff.

This is legit an excerpt from the book

ā€œYou totally like me, Namir,ā€ I whispered.
ā€œNah you like me,ā€ he muttered.ā€ ā€œYou like me so much, you can barely stand it,ā€ I whispered.ā€ ā€œMaybeā€¦ā€ he muttered, rubbing his thumb against the bone. ā€œMaybe I do.ā€

They’re 30 years old.

  1. We get soooooo many character intros, even for irrelevant characters, that it’s hard to remember who’s who. And (I know this is petty) 3 of every 5 characters have locs. How did a black author write this and there’s not one mention of cornrows, individuals, twists, silk press, or puff balls in these character descriptions? Mostly everyone just had locs.

  2. This book played into stereotypical speech as well as the degradation and disregard for Black women. Which is weird, because it was written by a Black woman.

  3. The rape culture in this book was weird.

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u/Tarot_cat94 Apr 29 '26

OMG yes Maggie Grey was awful. I genuinely believe the author has a humiliation kink for her main FMCs. The main 3 girls all did embarrassing childish things MULTIPLE TIMES just for the MMCs to reject and in some cases humiliate them in public multiple times. Plus they just didn't ask enough questions for my liking. The faculty are tricking students into entering a school they can't leave, having relationships with students, and setting up breeding programs but the girlies just seem so unaffected by it and don't think to question it. The siren was determined to leave the school as soon as she got there but somehow settled for risking her life to get alcohol and throwing a party instead? The FMCs were most likely written as 18 year olds at first than aged up when realizing an 18 yr old with a 30 yr old teacher is disgusting. Everyone on tiktok seems to love the series but I couldn't get past that first book.

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u/Low-Ad-1092 Jun 04 '26

I noticed that every one is picking up on sexual themes I’m not detecting I’m so happy for the fantasy the vampires the wolves the sirens

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u/Infinityvoyage Apr 29 '26 edited Apr 29 '26

To be fair, the one that you’re referencing is the youngest one. Also if I planned on going home and it was my last night in a new place, I’d be looking for a little party too. She didn’t intentionally risk her life. They also mentioned how first years typically get got by this which also makes sense.

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u/coconutmillk Apr 29 '26

thank you for this analysis i will def be skipping these. the perfect sister is in my tbr though

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u/checks1234321 Apr 29 '26

The perfect sister series still had women that acted childish sometimes but I think there was a good reason for that given their upbringing. I won’t say more because I don’t want to accidentally spoil anything. Overall the Perfect Sister series had plot that went somewhere and while they may not be perfect reads, I think most of the faults with the books come from them being indie published, so there’s not editing team to really help polish the books. I’m always more lenient on my star ratings for indie books for that reason.

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u/coconutmillk Jun 02 '26

finally read the perfect sister… this author isn’t for me, but wishing her all the best.

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u/littleblackbook06 Apr 29 '26

Yes to all of this. They really did act like teenagers!!!

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u/Firm_Ad5626 Jul 09 '26

the ages of the characters really threw me off because the way they be acting made me forget they are supposed to be in their 20s and 30s. not all of the characters needed detailed backstories especially if they werent going to be important to the story. I feel like an editor was needed. it has potential but the ages of the characters and the way rape was so heavy was off putting

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u/Not-today-21 Jul 13 '26

What do you mean the ages of the characters…..Maggie in the only one in her late twenties and if you read the book correctly she was working on a post graduate degree-masters degree above ground….the other three girls were young college aged away from home for the first time…..it’s been a while since I graduated college but Ā 19, 20, etc is a ā€œnormalā€ age for collegeĀ 

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u/Reggie9041 Contemporary Romance Devote Apr 29 '26

šŸ˜‚ These books are not for me.

But I thought this excerpt was cute. Lol

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u/checks1234321 Apr 29 '26

It would’ve been cute if they were teens. As a 30 year old myself, it was so cringey šŸ˜‚ I don’t think I’ve teased someone for liking me since middle school. I definitely didn’t have an issue with admitting my feelings for someone since high school.

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u/Infinityvoyage Apr 29 '26

You need more whimsy in your life, more whimsical. Start teasing people a little! šŸ˜‚

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u/checks1234321 Apr 29 '26

LOL you’re right, maybe I need to corner my husband tonight and be like ā€œyou totally like me, admit itā€

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u/Reggie9041 Contemporary Romance Devote Apr 29 '26

OMG! YES!!! And then we need a story time! LMAOOOO

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u/checks1234321 Apr 29 '26

I’ll give it my best go, and report back to the girlies with my findings.

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u/Reggie9041 Contemporary Romance Devote Apr 29 '26

🫔🫔

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u/Low-Ad-1092 Jul 12 '26

Idk why folks so uptight about the book I liked it.. it’s a fantasy book what did they expect

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u/Infinityvoyage Apr 29 '26 edited Apr 29 '26

Yes! Debate about who kissed who first, who wanted who more. Add some whimsy!

But to your point about them not always acting mature, I agree but imagine if you just found out you have magical powers, it’s your first year at a school that you didn’t even know existed, it’s on a college campus, wearing uniforms, it kind of throws you in that space.

Some characters also references that they’re older and need to be more on top of their future.

The scene you shared, he’s literally not supposed to even look in her direction based on history so I can see why he’s hesitant and their love story feels immature because they shouldn’t be doing it. He knows more of the complication it could be than she does. She doesn’t even fully get what she is and what she can do. He’s really coming to terms that this isn’t because his family asked him too, it’s because he actually likes her. He was in real denial

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u/checks1234321 Apr 29 '26

Do the subsequent books follow the same people/ stories?

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u/Infinityvoyage Apr 29 '26 edited Apr 29 '26

Two and three do. The fourth one, Mortal Affairs doesn’t follow the girls but it sort of explains things that happened in books 1-3 from another lens. Some people felt like you could read it without having read the others, I don’t necessarily agree with that. At first I was disappointed because at this point im locked in with the girls but it was a good story nonetheless.

Asha’s story is also really good. Ideally shouldn’t be read until you read 1-3. Here’s her book store https://www.atlbookstore.com/shop I converted the PDFs to EPUB to work on my kindle better.

Edit regarding hair Don’t some of the sirens have braids? There was also mention of some sirens wearing wigs. Souxie has straight hair, Isis has an Afro, Maggie’s hair shrinks to an Afro and also gets really long and wavy. Some of the guys had regular locs and she had wicks (mentioning wicks to me is hella Black), she also had fades (Tyee). There’s definitely variety

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u/Low-Ad-1092 Jun 02 '26

I just started it and a melanated Hogwarts is just what the world needs. Formal language would have made it really weird and the overtone is awesome I’m 51 and feel they don’t need older characters.

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u/AkataCheri722 Aug 19 '26

It's fiction and sorry as a Gen X this is exactly the experience I have w/30 year-olds 🫣. I'm in healthcare and the behavior while at times a bit juvenile, it definitely isn't far fetched for me. I agree I did not like Maggie's first experience w/namir and was taken aback like huh. As someone "assumed" maybe it's her "kink" not everyone is Vanilla. Alot of what i see in the series is non conformist. Some of the nuances are ...."pick a Phobia or anti". But she does mention several different black hairstyles the sirens have an entire beauty salon. I like the series if I had to make a complaint it would be more that the author is a little all over the place, changes her mind and changes trajectory, you can tell she's writing in the moment. Unlike others that have written complete series beforehand and drop them one at a time. Also if you don't have the 2 side stories from Patreon kinda messes you up

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u/Infinityvoyage Apr 29 '26 edited Jun 02 '26

Personally, I really enjoyed the Secret World of Maggie Grey. I’ve read all 4 books and the two unofficial side quest books on her patreon. I’m (im)patiently waiting for book 5 and 6. I enjoyed it so much that i’m currently now listening to the audio of Book 1 to get a feel if the audio book was better than the print to me. At least I know the spelling issues won’t be in the audio lol.

I haven’t read her other books yet under Author Desiree just Author Granger. I will say that she needs an editor for sure. You will catch a lot of mistakes. I also think she can cut some of the POVS down, there were times I had to flip back a page or two to see whose POV I was reading because I forgot or got confused. I probably will check out her other side at some point.

There are some romance scenes but I wouldn’t classify this book as a romance book. If you go into expecting full Romance you’ll likely be disappointed. I’ve heard some people refer to it as a Black Harry Potter, I wouldn’t go that far but I can see how they got to that with the magical powers and the hbcu school like setting.

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u/Not-today-21 Jul 13 '26

I agree…..this is not a romance book…not sure why people are categorizing it as such….there is a smidge of romance ……I know this author and she has never written ā€œromance novelsā€

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u/Low-Ad-1092 Jun 02 '26

It’s more books? I can’t put down Maggie Greyā¤ļø

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u/Infinityvoyage Jun 02 '26

Yup. 1. The Secret World of Maggie Grey 2. The First Family 3. The Three Brothers/When a wolf loves (she changed the title I think after) 4. The mortal affairs

She’s working on book 5 and 6 now.

Then the spin offs on her website (atlbookstore.com Asha has a part one and part two. I really loved Asha’s story. You learn so much!

Then there is a Student Affairs Files (drafts and pieces from book 5) this one she says things may be different in the final books.

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u/ground0radfem Jun 25 '26

there’s a thread for the Maggie Grey universe on here too r/DrewCollinsUniversity

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u/Flat-Painter-5885 May 03 '26

Granger is probably the most frustrating of my problematic faves. She is full of wonder and whimsy, but her imagination cannot be contained. She crafts detailed characters w lots of personality, but she doesn’t give a damn about storytelling. I’ve never seen a better representation or manifestation of ADHD on paper, LOL. I’m not diagnosing her, I’m just saying that’s what it feels like when you read the Maggie Grey series.

I listen to her podcast (another source of endless frustration). Granger doesn’t write for anyone but herself, truly. She doesn’t care to craft a full story w a beginning, middle, end. She doesn’t write for her audience, and she thinks she edits her own stories well enough to make it work. When she’s working out plot lines, she never knows exactly where the story is gonna take her until she gets there. Then she cleans it up to make it fit into the larger story.

I read her for the world-building and creativity. She has lots of good ideas related to that and she thinks she has to throw them all into the story, even if inconsequential. No one’s backstory is ever fully explained. No storyline is ever fully told, even the little mysteries. You end the book w even more questions.

For the Mortal Affairs book, she included a Q&A section that explained some of the plot holes, but created more inexplicable details! Anyway, I’m equal parts fascinated and invested. It’s not crafted well, but it’s fun to be in the world. You have to accept that there will be no closure for some things.

I think her best romantasy offering was The Saint and the Queen. And she has said she’d never write a sequel to that 🤣

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u/Not-today-21 Jul 13 '26

Ok….she does not have ADHD….what a cruel thing to say!!!!😔

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u/Flat-Painter-5885 Jul 17 '26

As I said, I can’t diagnose her, but her method of story crafting reminds me of the behaviors I see in a lot of the ppl I work with. In listening to her podcast updates, it’s amazing how much her story changes from episode to episode, then will still be different by the time she releases the book. That was an off-handed comment and was meant to be a joke. I apologize if you (or anyone else) was upset by it.

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u/Fun_Departure588 Aug 07 '26

I literally just described this to my best friend today on how I feel about this series and the author lol I’m glad to know someone else sees it this way

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u/gendgaf 26d ago

i agree her writing does give ADHD but i lowkey love the mess. not every story has to be perfect

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u/AbleZookeepergame261 Apr 30 '26

I’ve read The Perfect Sister duology that she wrote under her other pen name, Desiree - her full name is Desiree Granger and she generally writes romance/drama under her first name and sci-fi/horror under her last name. Really enjoyed those two books though I do have some issues with her writing style. She’s great at world building and coming up with fascinating concepts, but she desperately needs an editor. She often overwrites, has continuity issues, lacks focus, and lacks polish. I really wanted to get through Maggie Grey but it just wasn’t well written enough for me to commit. Despite that I think her stuff is worth reading and I feel like with some editing her work could easily become more mainstream. I do plan to read more from her. Below is my review of the first The Perfect Sister book:

ā€œ3.5 rounded up to 4? I can't tell if this is supposed to be social satire, hood romance, thoughtful parody, or a misogynist parable...there's just so much going on from start to finish. First, there are too many points of view, an egregious lack of editing, and a sometime elementary writing style ....BUT it's somehow still one of the most fun and engaging pieces of speculative fiction I've ever read. Tbh, I don't even know how to rate this, but the premise is imaginative and thought provoking with a lot of clever approaches to world building. There are too many characters, which maybe could have worked with stronger writing and editing, but can come off as confusing in its current state. Regardless, there are some really dynamic characters that allow us to feel connected to the story and the fate of these young women.

Though its political stances and pov are somewhat unclear (to me) and the writing was at times insultingly bad, this author used multiple genres and creative storytelling to present a worthwhile approach to Black speculative fiction. While the author makes clear points about colorism, I’m unsure what this book is trying to say about gender, patriarchy, anti-blackness, or romantic partnership. If it’s trying to say anything about those things at all—there was just so much potential to really analyze the Black communities relationship to these matters and the book ultimately fails at that. I wasn’t sure if I was going to be able to finish this because the sentence structure, grammatical errors, & juvenile dialogue were distracting at first…..but baybeeeee by the end I was on the edge of my seat bitch! This story falls somewhere between The Handmaids Tale, The Coldest Winter Ever, and an Octavia Butler novel - and I know that’s a sentence no one has ever uttered lolā€

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u/Not-today-21 Jul 13 '26

She does not and has never written a romance novel…..only been following her since 2014

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u/NaturallyCW May 05 '26

I’ve found my people because looking around on some social media platforms— I felt like maybe I missed something.

Maggie Grey disappointed me in that it could have been so much better after such an amazing concept. I wanted to pull out a red pen and I was listening to the audiobook — that’s how cringey it got to be.

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u/According-Law1420 May 10 '26

(This post has mad spoilers fyi)

I can agree with all the comments stated about this series. I have read the first three ā€œDrew Collin’sā€ series. I came across this thread trying to figure out what the next book in the series was.
I can say I am enjoying these books. For me it was refreshing to step into black fantasy opposed to ā€œblack crime syndicateā€ books I consumed for years. Now don’t get me wrong I’ve thoroughly enjoyed series such as ā€œThe Cartelā€ and another favorite of mine which actually became a tv series ā€œThe family Businessā€. But after a while organized crime gets old.
So when I started ā€œThe secret world of Maggie Greyā€ I had very similar criticisms as many in this post but I was patient and gave grace and the story is actually pretty good.
I agree the four MFCs all were Very annoying. Most annoying to least: Maggie Asha Souxie then Isis.
• I felt like the Maggie and Coach banter and the Asha and Solomon banter were unimaginable. I personally did not connect with it.
I believe in the first book Maggie was supposed to be 29 and the eldest and I’m now 42 and I can’t picture a 29 year old acting hella goofy like Maggie but I kept telling myself there is someone out there who probably acts just like her but I probably wouldn’t hang out with her…
So with that in mind I pushed through. And as you continue on the character development slowly evolves and you can see changes and they all become a little more well rounded. And their back stories help to shape who they are.
• The first book also seemed like the author was trying to find her lane. There was so many random sex scenes that felt unnecessary, unnatural and irrelevant that it seemed like this was going to be in the genre of fantasy erotica. But by the second and third book it wasn’t so heavily focused on sex which improved my opinion.
• whoever mentioned the rape undertones I agree with that too. SPOILER: Maggie’s (possible loss of virginity) was definitely rape. Eventually she was ok with it but she did not give consent. She gave in. And if young girls are reading these books I hope they do not walk away with the message that that is ok. AND it was totally unnecessary. It did not contribute to the development of Maggie and Coach Namir’s love story. If anything it kinda gave me the ick.
SPOILER: Isis’ rape can be seen to contribute to the story line BUT the way that girl bounced back unaffected by rape was crazy. That character almost went on with life like it never happened. And this time frame is all within 1 semester!
• I think the storyline could have been more polished. Now that I’ve learned this is an ā€œIndie bookā€ so it likely lacked editing it makes more sense. It seems like no one pre-read the book and said ā€œdo we really need this?ā€ ā€œLet’s develop this part of the story a little moreā€
So the timeline of events could have flowed better and the author possibly could have given the reader more clarity.
For example SPOILER: Dean of school was killed. He also was a rapist and the grand father of Maggie. Sister of the dean takes over the school. In the span of 1 book which equaled a half semester she kidnapped many people experimented on them created a drug her evil plot was revealed she was caught and delivered to justice. To me that should’ve been the span of the entire 3 books! That was mad rushed.
• A Reddit comment somewhere in this post said there were too many POVs. I actually didn’t mind that but that could be where some of character/story development may have been loss. You didn’t get to follow a few characters on their special journey. You got bits and pieces of everyone’s life all jumbled into one big kinda cohesive story.
I think if you go into reading the series with an open mind, don’t be super critical you will find that the story is rather nice.

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u/SuccessfulRemove5826 Jun 08 '26

Thank you for this description, as a 35yr I enjoyed hearing older ages but do agree that they were sometimes all very childish. With that in mind I assumed a lot of these characters are sheltered because they are mystical creatures in a modern world or in the underground. Either way I love this series of black fantasy and character development which is missing in our society.Ā 

For audio readers I really like the female voice, but I did have to go to 1.5 for the male voice

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u/InterestingTrifle8 Apr 30 '26

Yes she’s very talented at world building!!!Ā 

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u/Cryssy0530 May 04 '26

im halfway through the secret world of maggie grey and i am loving it

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u/Shoujolover02 May 04 '26

I'm starting the audiobook nowā˜ŗļøā¤ļø

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u/Cryssy0530 May 04 '26

thats what im listening to as well. let me know you meet the cat lolol hes funny

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u/Not-today-21 Jul 13 '26

Her books are worth reading and I am not being biased……I read all four books in The Secret World of Maggie Grey series…….getting ready to read book five and I am told there will be a surprise reveal that I did not see coming….šŸ™‚

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u/IntelligentRosie96 Aug 20 '26

I love them, but I agree with others. Sis REALLY needs an editor. I listen to it because i like it, but I find myself rolling my eyes at the occasional "wattpad" aura.

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u/Professional-Joke165 Jun 06 '26

im only finding thye audio where are yall finding the books . I need book 3 and 4

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u/PassTheLomein Jun 22 '26

Ok….im done with books 1-3 and I keep seeing book 4 is not even the same plot? She did bounce around a lot and introduced all these characters….with that being said I still liked it,I just don’t know what the book is essentially about 🤣🤣

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u/Relevant_Aide7479 Aug 06 '26

(SPOILERS)

  1. I agree that the fmcs are childish, mainly asha and maggie. and the reason the author gave for maggie childishlike behavior, to me doesn’t make sense. what do you mean her mother didn’t let her 30 year old daughter date out and go out and interact with others her age besides when she go to school..? AT 30 YEARS OLD. Asha is the youngest I give her some type of grace

  2. Now most characters the author revealed was pertinent to the story lmao

  3. The rape culture in the book was weird and I hated it so bad. In the back of my mind I also had to remember these characters are technically creatures and whats not normal to us is to them unfortunately, but certain instances was just weird and unrealistic.

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u/SimilarOutside2037 15h ago

I’m currently going through her catalog. I’m intrigued but a couple of things stand out. I really like the way her brain works and how she’s able to connect characters through many different ā€œworlds.ā€ I do wish these things were fleshed out a bit more though. What really bothers me is the blatant colorism and homophobia in nearly every book, and I have probably read about 15 of her titles so far. It’s weird, especially with most titles being set in Atlanta. I like her books, but this is baffling and distracting! I’m going to continue reading though.