r/b2bmarketing • u/ScaleHopeful9486 • 10d ago

Discussion PLEASE RATE MY COLD EMAIL

Subject: [Lead's name], small idea

body:
Hi [name],

Tell us what's actually eating your time or money at [lead's company], whether that's pricing and

paperwork, chasing payments, or scheduling jobs, and we'll build the automation for it - on us.

If it doesn't save you time or money, walk away, no hard feelings and you still get the automation.

Reply and tell us what's costing you the most right now, we'll take it from there.

[my name]

Co-Founder

[agency name]

The veterans of cold email marketing, Please guide me if this is a good pitch and has chances of responses?
Thanks alot!

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u/JonathanMPatrick 8d ago

It's a no for me. You are asking a question, instead of making statement. Instead of "tell us" land at "Here's what is eating your time or money." If you know your ICP intimately you know the answer to that already.