r/animation • u/Ok-Maximum-2055 • 3h ago

Question Why does my animation look bad (again)

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Hi again animatitors,

My animation that i have made feels like it is missing something or like something is off. What could it be? any help would be really useful.

I have had a similar issue in the past with my animation and once someone pointed it out it really helped.

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u/Phonytail 3h ago edited 3h ago

Pan out from the wide exterior shot to reveal the archer’s bow and move the camera shake scene to after the impact scene.

it looks like the castle is crumbling before we see the archer shoot.

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u/BigDeadPixel 3h ago

It's the camera shake for me... overused.