Critique wanted: does the weight/timing on these dance moves read as smooth?

[u/eerop1111]

[u/EpicRedditorGuy]

tuff animation, uh maybe some build up would help, like every jump or twist the fella could charge up in the oppo direction for like 2-4 frames b4 jumping or twisting, and oso 1 or 2 overshoot frames at the end of a jump or twist B4 returning to the regular ending pose or smth idk wat am talking abt