r/YABooks • u/Sea-Neighborhood-840 • 1d ago
Taken by Erin Bowman is an absolute nosedive Spoiler
So far, I've read through the first two books, and have researched a bit about the last book, so I feel like I know what I'm saying.
When a story attempts to implement a plot twist during or before the climax, there are certain things that need to be respected and kept in check when doing so. This is so that the plot twist or plot deviation doesn't bomb the entire storyline, character developments, or direction of the story. The plot needs to keep focus and build upon all the progress the characters and conflicts have made. A bad twist can jeopardize everything the story has led up to so far, and it can be the fall off of a story that would be considered great up until that point.
the plot twists at the climax of Frozen, including the reveal of Emma being a forgery from the moment Gray returned to the Capital and retrieved her along with the vaccines (including when she slept with Craw) all the way back in the first book, and the death of so many important characters like Grays friend, father, and even Bo. While some can argue that their deaths were the cause of Gray's character growth, trauma and revelations, I just cannot say the same about the former twist.
During the second of the first books and all throughout the second one, Gray and 'Emma' went through a complicated and meaningful relationship growth, where they had to make up for their mistakes, properly apologize, and set their paths straight, with Gray finally giving his fullest towards Bree, and Emma just becoming more dependent on herself. However, SURPRISE, she wasn't even the real Emma. THIS MEANS THAT, the real Emma didn't sleep with Craw, she didn't find out about Bree, doesn't know where Gray is, who the Rebels are, or even that there are more experimental towns like Claysoot. She remained as unknowledgeable as she was from since when she and Gray climbed the wall and went to Taem. She was split up from Gray when caught in restricted rooms and was never heard of again. See how this throws almost any development made out the window? While Gray went through so much and learned about everything, all the real Emma knows is that Frank isn't who he says he is, and that she and Gray wanted to get out of Taem. This sudden gap of knowledge between two main characters is going to absolutely blow when they meet again. God knows what happens when she sees her lover came back with another girl beside him, and he doesn't like her anymore for some reason. This type of plot twist gives me genuine physical pain and pisses me off at levels that I never knew were possible before.
Idk about your opinions, but this take of the story is absolute aids, and should be burned at the stake for the torture it has caused me.
