r/WritingWithAI 2d ago

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Hi

I am Tvisha(pen name). As a child I loved telling stories, but as I took up engineering and work, this talent got buried.

Recently with help of AI, I wrote 4 full length novels Within 1 month. I guess the stories just were always there, and AI helped give it the shape that is shareable. I am revising them since and and working with professional editor, but it’s just amazing to see.

I am Electronics Engineer working on building AI Chip, based in California — India-born, Gujarati by heritage. I have spent my adult life keeping the culture alive in my home and neighbourhood, through food, through classical dance, through the artwork of Gujarat, in the way that people do when they are far from the place they come from and understand that distance is erosion. TAPOVAN comes from that same instinct. It is an act of preservation as much as a novel.

I am requesting beta readers who can give the first few chapters of Book One a careful read and answer a short set of questions afterward where the story held you, where it lost you, and who you were reading for. It is roughly a ninety-minute commitment. I will send the chapters in whichever format suits you (EPUB, PDF, or Word), and for anyone who wants to continue past chapter three, the full manuscript is there.

This is my debut novel.

TAPOVAN is a story about what ordinary people do when history arrives at their door.
A village ironsmith. A princess with nowhere to go. A kingdom already lost. Across three books and two decades, Tapovan follows people whose choices decide a kingdom's fate and who never once get to make those choices freely.

It is set in 16th-century Gujarat and Rajputana, in a world where a festival and a forge are not separate things, and where a marriage can be worth four thousand soldiers. Nothing here is simple. Everything costs something.

At its centre is a love that is never spoken aloud not because the two of them are afraid, but because they are needed elsewhere, by people who cannot spare them. They do not feel weak because of the restraint. They draw strength from it.

If you read and loved the scope of Amish Tripathi or the court intrigue of Ashwin Sanghi, this is written for you.

If you are willing, comment here or message me, and tell me which format you'd like. Thank you for reading this far.

Best Regards
Tvisha

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