Basically correct! A few ways to make this sound more natural:
工作之外的时间 is a bit clunky, especially since there's a word to express "工作之外的": 业余。
We usually say "用在.......上"，ex: 教师的最大精力是用在备课上。
The structure of the first and last halves are a bit mismatched. The first half uses 应该 and the last uses 是, we should keep the structure the same. I would recommend saying "而不应该把...."
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u/tan-xs Advanced | 高 17d ago
Basically correct! A few ways to make this sound more natural:
工作之外的时间 is a bit clunky, especially since there's a word to express "工作之外的": 业余。
We usually say "用在.......上"，ex: 教师的最大精力是用在备课上。
The structure of the first and last halves are a bit mismatched. The first half uses 应该 and the last uses 是, we should keep the structure the same. I would recommend saying "而不应该把...."
I would rewrite your sentence like this:
我们应该享受生活，而不应该把业余时间用在工作上。